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Betrayal - Mister Blue Eyes

You were a beautiful man with cobalt eyes so blue I wasn't looking to find love or anything like it Then I saw you, your eyes sparkling, you smiled and then I knew I was now taken by your beautiful looks and your wit We went for coffee and had our first date the next day I was so smitten instantly and wanted you to stay You lured me into your bed, saying you loved me, had your way We met again for several more passionate dates I had no idea you lied and already had a mate Then there was nothing, no contact, I did nothing but wait My heart broken and my pride hurt, I shouldn't have trusted you Then I saw you that day with her at the local market Pretending to not know me while playing and flirting away I knew then I would have to tell her and change your fate 11/4/18

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Eve Roper

Date: 12/4/2018 7:36:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem, Andrea, very well written. It stirs a reader's imagination and the very sad emotions . Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France

Date: 12/3/2018 4:34:00 PM

Tania, congratulations on your win in my contest, with this exceptional write, yes betrayal has a price ~

Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/3/2018 6:27:00 PM

Thank you Constance for my placement, I liked your contest and the challenge it gave me to write in a new form!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/10/2018 12:18:00 PM

Yes, tell her - the crouton deserves no mercy. How many will relate to this? Straight-fact told and delivered, great kick (for him) at the end. All the best ... CayCay

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/10/2018 4:15:00 PM

Thank you CayCay!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2018 6:16:00 PM

ooooh, you had to tell her!!! Some women would not do that but I rather enjoyed that ending there!! WEll done in the contest, Tania. This is one i am eager to try!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/6/2018 8:36:00 PM

Thank you Andrea!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 11/5/2018 1:26:00 PM

Such a beautiful and heartfelt write this is, there is nothing more painful than knowing that you were betrayed, used, and in reality that person hasn't got any emotions for you, such a thing can break you, but karma always plays its role, I really like the rwist in the end, that guy sure deserves it, I wiah you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/5/2018 4:17:00 PM

Thank you!