Bethrotal Hymn

Magic of stars and beauty unsurpassed, bath me
In the fragrance of your dew, let my heart sing
The woodland voices to outlast, here on the sunless lea
Where bats and owl invisibly pulse their wing.

Like the moon she will come soft into my arms
Laden with the bright scent of flowers in her hair
And the wind will serenade her, and love disarms
Our two fancies from the pillage of our fear.

This is the hour when life's care abate, and sweet now
The cicadas cascade their uncrinkling chorals loud
Love calls here from heart to heart in every bough
O sweet one, come now, come now and leave the crowd.

Enfold me in the ebony of your breast, give me milk
The moon cannot exceed in warm sugared whiteness
Let naked touch naked in thy diamond drizzled sheet of silk
We will feast on love, and find solace in Eden's happiness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
March 14, 2010 at 10:51 AM
What can I say, L'nass!! This is worthy of the awesome win with this beauty!! Goes to my favs.! My congratulations to you!! Peace, audrey
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March 9, 2010 at 6:03 PM
congratulations on your success with this fine work....cheers Margaret
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March 8, 2010 at 10:14 PM
Wow, a sensuous poem about nightfall, L'nass. Congrats! LUv, Andrea
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March 8, 2010 at 4:03 PM
congrats on the win!! enjoyed reading!!
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March 8, 2010 at 11:37 AM
L'nass, many congratulations on your second place with this fine poem >> James
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March 8, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's Beyond Nightfall! contest L'nass. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 7:28 AM
As only you could do, ..... breath-taking! Congratulations, dear L'nass on this magnificent poem! ~ Carrie
Guzzi Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 5:22 AM
a real swooner especially the last verse...ohhhh lalalaaaa....I envy your ebony skinned Eve. GREAT win! Light & Love
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March 8, 2010 at 12:33 AM
L'nass my congratulations to you on winning this contest. I can feel the imagery you enfolded here. (^_^) Noel.
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March 7, 2010 at 9:12 PM
Cngratulations on your well deserved Joyce
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March 7, 2010 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations L'nass, on your success in the Poetry Soup member contest: Beyond Nightfall! Sponsored by: Laura Mckenzie. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! 2nd place! Nice, rhythmic, and sensual! Smiles, Dane Ann
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March 7, 2010 at 6:16 PM
Congratulations on your win...HOT...enjoyed...Marty
Richards Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Just beauty unfolded....truly beautiful! ~ Carrie
Pickett Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Another instant classic my friend... Keep em comin'....:JP]
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