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Bethrotal Hymn

Magic of stars and beauty unsurpassed, bath me In the fragrance of your dew, let my heart sing The woodland voices to outlast, here on the sunless lea Where bats and owl invisibly pulse their wing. Like the moon she will come soft into my arms Laden with the bright scent of flowers in her hair And the wind will serenade her, and love disarms Our two fancies from the pillage of our fear. This is the hour when life's care abate, and sweet now The cicadas cascade their uncrinkling chorals loud Love calls here from heart to heart in every bough O sweet one, come now, come now and leave the crowd. Enfold me in the ebony of your breast, give me milk The moon cannot exceed in warm sugared whiteness Let naked touch naked in thy diamond drizzled sheet of silk We will feast on love, and find solace in Eden's happiness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/14/2010 10:51:00 AM
What can I say, L'nass!! This is worthy of the awesome win with this beauty!! Goes to my favs.! My congratulations to you!! Peace, audrey
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Date: 3/9/2010 6:03:00 PM
congratulations on your success with this fine work....cheers Margaret
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Date: 3/8/2010 10:14:00 PM
Wow, a sensuous poem about nightfall, L'nass. Congrats! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:03:00 PM
congrats on the win!! enjoyed reading!!
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:37:00 AM
L'nass, many congratulations on your second place with this fine poem >> James
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's Beyond Nightfall! contest L'nass. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 7:28:00 AM
As only you could do, ..... breath-taking! Congratulations, dear L'nass on this magnificent poem! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/8/2010 5:22:00 AM
a real swooner especially the last verse...ohhhh lalalaaaa....I envy your ebony skinned Eve. GREAT win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:33:00 AM
L'nass my congratulations to you on winning this contest. I can feel the imagery you enfolded here. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/7/2010 9:12:00 PM
Cngratulations on your well deserved Joyce
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations L'nass, on your success in the Poetry Soup member contest: Beyond Nightfall! Sponsored by: Laura Mckenzie. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! 2nd place! Nice, rhythmic, and sensual! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...HOT...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 2/23/2010 8:14:00 AM
Just beauty unfolded....truly beautiful! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/23/2010 7:38:00 AM
Another instant classic my friend... Keep em comin'....:JP]
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