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Best Poem Ever

Sitting outside with loose papers on my lap, a gust blew the top two pages away. It was a poem that contained some creatures and the usual clouds and mists and how fossils feel about mountains. Like a Borges story, it contained the past and future and how time distorts yet fuels our ability to love. I jumped up and chased it down the road, the poem containing metaphysical doubts about existence, my own and yours, and how everything doesn’t mean anything. There was a buzzing hornet and Diogenes’ mordant laughter and it listed the questions that answer themselves – Will I be born? Do I crave applause? But it was gone, my best poem ever, eaten by cactus or the wind.

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Date: 3/14/2021 11:45:00 AM
Hello Jim Levy, so nice to met you. I would never write a poem outside. I would be very upset if my poem blew away if i did write a poem outside. enjoy your day my friend,
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2021 11:47:00 AM
I just want to add welcome to Poetry soup Jim Levy. enjoy your day.
Date: 3/14/2021 8:29:00 AM
Jim, unfortunately, the best one is always the one that got away. I've lost so many ideas that came in the dead of night, and I was too lazy to jot them down on the nightstand. The next morning I could not recall them. Good job!
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