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Best Pick Up Line

You are so beautiful, please forgive me for staring!

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Njeri Hunjeri

June 8, 2015 at 1:39 PM

Lol...

Cecilia Macfarlane

May 17, 2015 at 7:06 PM

A sweet line and if said sincerely would have you picking up ladies swiftly. Congrats on your awesome win! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux

May 17, 2015 at 9:37 PM

I only need one and she is indeed beautiful. Hugs back to you Cecilia.

Funom Makama

May 16, 2015 at 12:30 PM

incredible piece! Keeping on giving us such lovely lines. #7. Happy weekend

Richard Lamoureux

May 17, 2015 at 9:06 AM

Thanks Funom.

Yanny Widjanarko

May 7, 2015 at 7:25 PM

Women will fall for that! Lol! What a great pick up line, Rick. Congrats on your win. I wondered if you got my soupmail that I sent few days ago. Wishing you a great day :D g, yanny

Richard Lamoureux

May 17, 2015 at 9:06 AM

Hi Yanny, I will check.

Andrea Dietrich

May 7, 2015 at 4:29 PM

came back here to remember what you wrote. So what happened to simply "HI"!

Richard Lamoureux

May 7, 2015 at 5:24 PM

I thought I might need a few more words for the contest *lol*.

Jaycee Cervenka

May 6, 2015 at 4:12 PM

So very classic..but it works! congrats!

Richard Lamoureux

May 7, 2015 at 12:04 AM

Thanks Janet.

Skat A

May 6, 2015 at 10:02 AM

Richard :-) Congratulations with your pick up line entry in Judy K's "Fun pick up line" poetry contest. Sweet *SKAT*

Richard Lamoureux

May 7, 2015 at 12:05 AM

Thanks SKAT.

Poet Destroyer A

May 6, 2015 at 9:30 AM

Richard, a sweet one. I hate when Nathan stares at me too long. Guuuurrrrrr! LOL, He'll say. "I just love looking at you." I'm like gosh, it's so annoying. After 5 years, I will catch him staring at me, then he turns away. LOL, Good for him. Congratulations with your awesome pickup line win. Always ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

May 7, 2015 at 12:06 AM

It is good that he is captivated by you! Thanks for commenting Linda.

Seren Roberts

May 6, 2015 at 1:59 AM

Oh Richard I wonder what I would have answered? ...Congrats ....Seren

Richard Lamoureux

May 6, 2015 at 7:20 AM

Thanks Seren, what would you have answered??

Judy Konos

May 5, 2015 at 9:13 PM

Most gentle pickup I've ever heard....Thank you for being in my contest

Richard Lamoureux

May 6, 2015 at 7:21 AM

My pleasure Judy.

Andrea Dietrich

May 5, 2015 at 5:08 PM

so was that YOUR pickup that worked best. I LIKES it!!! Congrats.

Richard Lamoureux

May 6, 2015 at 7:23 AM

Thanks Andrea, in truth I would just smile and say hi.

Robert Stoner Jr

May 5, 2015 at 4:59 PM

You went into that one open eyed till she pulled out the mace Richard. Congratulations on your win

Richard Lamoureux

May 6, 2015 at 7:24 AM

Ha ha, thanks Robert.

Paul Callus

May 5, 2015 at 4:46 PM

Very honest pick-up line, Richard! I see that congrats are in line, too. // Thank you for reading and commenting on my senryu "Love is Free". // paul

Richard Lamoureux

May 6, 2015 at 7:26 AM

Thanks Paul, I could never use one of those what's your Sign lines myself.

Eve Roper

May 5, 2015 at 4:06 PM

Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve

Richard Lamoureux

May 6, 2015 at 7:27 AM

Thanks Eve and blessings to you as well.

Jan Allison

May 5, 2015 at 2:47 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

May 6, 2015 at 7:19 AM

Thanks and Hugs back.

Tim Ryerson

May 4, 2015 at 6:30 AM

I forgive you for staring Richard...Happens all the time. Can't help it if I'm so beautiful, I was born that way. It's a curse I tell you, a CURSE!...VERY good and original pick-up line my friend! Gotta remember to try this next time I go out...

Tim Ryerson

May 4, 2015 at 8:27 AM

Right you are Richard...I have been humiliated on many occasions...

Richard Lamoureux

May 4, 2015 at 8:15 AM

The only thing that exceeds your good looks is your humility! Thanks for the smile.

Arthur Vaso

May 3, 2015 at 5:04 PM

Worst Pick up line: Is your dad a baker? cause you sure have great buns!

Casarah Nance

May 3, 2015 at 2:17 PM

aww you can be forgiven for anything with that line ;)

Richard Lamoureux

May 6, 2015 at 7:31 AM

Thanks Casarah, I prefer a simple approach.

Eileen Manassian

May 3, 2015 at 1:08 PM

;) Awwwwww....beauty is in the eye of the beholder...would be my rejoinder to that line! We have a saying here that goes something like this..."Your eyes are beautiful." (Meaning...that's why you see me that way.) Lovely, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux

May 6, 2015 at 7:33 AM

That is a perfect response, thanks Eileen.