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Best Laid Plans

A flawless ceremony,
and elegant reception,
followed by long honeymoon 
delayed by snowfall.




For John Freeman's love /humor contest Won 2nd place

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James Fraser

January 18, 2011 at 12:55 PM

Congrats on your win in John's contest Joyce with this super Dodoitsu....:)

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2011 at 7:41 PM

oh, this is so cool, JOyce. Congrats on your big win with this clever one!

Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2011 at 4:32 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Francine Roberts

January 17, 2011 at 10:43 AM

congrats on your win Joyce, lovely dodoitsu

Sharon Ruebel

January 17, 2011 at 10:40 AM

Hello Joyce, Congratulations on your win, this is so witty and a much deserved win my dear. As Always, Shar

Eiken Laan

January 17, 2011 at 8:47 AM

Joyce, a beautiful Dodoitsu, congratulations.

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 17, 2011 at 8:31 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Joyce sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

January 17, 2011 at 4:41 AM

Hello Joyce . Thanks for the kind comment and congratulations on your success with this fine write.At least it was not a frozen heart that delayed the honeymoon. Eamon

Tahera Mannan

January 16, 2011 at 8:16 PM

Many congratulations dear friend for this win.

Audrey Haick

January 16, 2011 at 6:50 PM

Joyce, warm congratulations on your fantastic win in John's contest! Love, Annalise

Nette Onclaud

January 16, 2011 at 5:38 PM

yeyyy, KUDOS to you for hitting the high charts, joyce.:) nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 16, 2011 at 5:37 PM

Congrats Joyce on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu my friend.. enjoy another top tenner too..with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

January 16, 2011 at 3:07 PM

So happy to see you in the winners' circle, Joyce. Congratulations. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 16, 2011 at 3:00 PM

Congratulatios onn the second place win in the contest, Joyce

John Freeman

January 16, 2011 at 2:48 PM

This was an excellent one Joyce, though came in second place, Congratulations on your fine 2nt place. Agape, Moses

Robert Pettit

January 16, 2011 at 2:35 PM

This is a best laid dodoitsu. Congratulations on your win in the contest.

Julie Heckman

January 15, 2011 at 5:00 PM

Very nice read. Thanks Julie Heckman

John Freeman

January 15, 2011 at 11:31 AM

Joyce, thanks so much for your conscious support of my contest, it does not go unnoticed. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

January 13, 2011 at 2:51 PM

Nicely done, Joyce! We had a Nor-easter on my wedding day, but we still went on the honeymoon because we were headed for a ski resort. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle, dear. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

January 12, 2011 at 10:09 PM

Awesome Joyce.. good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Michael Jordan

January 12, 2011 at 12:32 PM

Joyce - In my life I have learned to let my wife make our plans, because mine always seem to be very malevolent in nature regardless of how hard I try to not be that way - I guess not anymore but at one time it was that way and I believe if its not broken then there is no need to fix it - mj

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