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Besotted

When I compare my love to frozen vines, repressed beneath the frost’s relentless grip, while sweetness looms, I nary taste the wines of love that lingers taunting me to sip. My aching skin, akin to frozen grapes, betrays the warmth your nectar must exude. Though pressed by weight and time, still on I traipse, a doom I meet, forbearing interlude. I crave your taste, but yearning still haunts me. Your ardour shines yet coldness stains its glow. Your charm forbidden till a bride to be, conserved in mem’ry neath the depth of snow Besotted by a love that’s crystallized, Unripe fruit, yet adored, and idolized.

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Date: 3/4/2025 3:07:00 AM
crystallized love, now this is interesting write. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/3/2025 12:30:00 PM
I thought you were bold to share this one. I started wondering about the age difference. It was one of my favorites. Congrats on your writing!
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