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Bert's Country Store

A long-standing landmark that I often visited as a tyke, Was Bert's Country Store just a ways up Dalton Pike. Dalton could be missed if your eyes you'd briefly close. The population at that crossroads "town" was thirty or so, I suppose. The inviting porch had some benches where loafers hung around. To enter the store you stepped over Bert's snoozing hound. Winter days you'd find the rabble huddled 'round the stove, Where discussions of crops, good whiskey and women throve! An old cowbell jingled upon opening the sagging screen door. Once inside you trod upon a squeaky, bare, wooden floor. 'Twas a wonder that Bert could find anything 'midst all the clutter, But in a trice he'd find anything for which you would utter! Bert had no tolerance for frills or the latest fancy decor. You'd risk tripping over barrels and rope coiled upon the floor. The sagging shelves were stocked with canned goods and lanterns, Wheels of cheese, muskrat traps and the latest sewing patterns. He sometimes sold hot dogs and sodas under the counter, As long as the county health officials he didn't encounter! The Hoosier "town" of Dalton ain't listed on the maps as heretofore, And, alas, Bert nor his old country store exist there anymore. Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2010 8:15:00 AM
THIS I CAN KINDA VISUALIZE BEING THERE LOL, "AS LONG AS THE HEALTH OFFICIALS HE DIDN'T ENCOUNTER", THAT GOT A CHUCKLE OUTTA ME. ENJOYED YOUR WRITE BOB. . AND BY THE WAY I'D JUST LIKE TO SAY I HAVEN'T BEEN ON LATELY BUT WHEN I DO I ALWAYS LOOK FORWARD TO CATCHING UP WITH YOU WRITES, VERY MUCH ENJOY. -IRMA
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Date: 6/6/2010 4:25:00 PM
A nice story, Bob. Very nostalgic and homey.
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Date: 6/5/2010 3:24:00 PM
Bob, the Black Rain is a fear I have because everything on the sea's surface seems to get swept up in the tropical cyclones. The oil will reach us in a day or two. It's not far away now, just a couple small counties over and moving fast. The longterm impact on our economy nationwide will be devastating. Good luck buying oysters. This area produces 10 percent of the WORLD's oysters and nearly all consumed in the US. So sad...
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Date: 6/5/2010 2:47:00 PM
Places like "Bert's Country Store" seem to be disappearing and we are left with the likes of Costco and Walmart. There are still some such homey stores in North Florida, but soon these merchants will join the parade of those who are migrating to areas not directly impacted by the oil spill. Hard times are ahead for our country, my friend, and I wish I could have paid a visit to Bert. It sounds like quite a charming atmosphere and you recreated it so well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/5/2010 9:22:00 AM
Nice one. Loved it cheers Suresh
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