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Berg En Dal Mountains and Valleys

BERG EN DAL Mountains and Valleys Valleys were filled with running water From the storm last night, A dream come true for the animals, The drought became a wretched fright Watching the wildlife enduring this plight It made me so sad, But then so glad For the sudden storm Small dams were full, rivers overflowing Green grass, sprouting and growing! But some patches still dry Especially if hilly and high, Lightening set off a bush fire This was as bad as drought, With fear fraught, The animals couldn’t survive The heat and flames, Didn’t know where to go Birdlife, animals, insects died, And were fried, So whether drought or rain, Both brought the same pain! A haven for poachers Who snared animals running away, Lions, elephants, buffalo and rhino, What a hell of a day. The rangers could not get near, They were in danger, flames and And toxic smoke was their fear, Poachers had a field day In an inhumane way! Animals Defenceless against The cunning of man Rangers ,unable to cover the span Outnumbered by poachers Had to pray these criminals Could not survive, Could no longer contrive, Would only themselves deprive Of staying alive! BERG EN DAL MEANS IN AFRIKAANSE HILLS AND VALLEYS A CAMPSITE FOUND IN THE KRUGER NATIONAL PARK

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Date: 11/10/2020 2:08:00 PM
Was this a very recent event, Jennifer? How harrowing! I bet the poachers have a field day in AFrica. That is so sad amidst all this calamity. Very well written and your rhyming is spot on, as usual!!
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Date: 11/10/2020 2:07:00 PM
could not find a recent one of yours I have not read, so I came to one you posted on my birthday. Let's take a look now!!
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Date: 9/28/2020 5:58:00 AM
man and his greed has so much to answer for Jenifer, thanks for opening our eyes to this injustice in your poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2020 5:38:00 AM
Hi Jan. it breaks my heart when we go to the park and occasionally see a rhino without his horn, or an elephant without its tusks - this is very rare to see but we have once or twice, they have survived their ordeal, but they have excellent memories and too many humans are crowding them. They could charge one day, the rhino or the elephant. Both have tempers! Thank-you Jan, blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/17/2020 2:03:00 PM
Save the Rhino If only the rain could drown the poachers and let the animals live. Some fantastic recent writes you posted here Jennifer. Title drew me been there myself as well. How lucky are we to have seen such wonders that life has to offer . Only to see it being ravaged for what exactly?????? Animal cruelty a crime beyond reproach
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/23/2020 8:23:00 AM
Thank-you for a wonderful comment Christopher - wouldn't it be great if they drowned but unfortunately they are alive and well and living in South Africa. Some of the wild life commentaries that we see on TV are horrific. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/10/2020 6:38:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... a very sad tale indeed especially for the wild life. The real problem appears the people who buy the animal products and the poachers employers. Stop them and there is no money for poachers, but how to do that is the question - thanks again Jennifer - Lindsay
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/23/2020 8:26:00 AM
And unfortunately big names and corporations involved so it can never be solved. These poor animals are facing extinction! Thank you Lindsay, a great comment. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 9/10/2020 6:38:00 PM
A champion you are Jennifer for those poor animals.
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Date: 9/23/2020 8:28:00 AM
Hi Michale, such a lovely compliment Michael, I only write what is unfortunately true, and the fear is the are milking our wildlife to the extent that they will become extinct. Thank-you Michael. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 9/9/2020 1:16:00 PM
Man is the most dangerous and the cruelest animal on the planet. The things some people do is a sin in the eyes of God and they will pay for it. These animals belong to God and He created them for the same reason He created us, to give Him joy. They will pay for abusing God's animals, and His people too. Great write here Jennifer filled with imagery and emotion. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/7/2020 3:23:00 PM
What a tragic story, just heartbreaking, it is important to share something like this, you told it vividly and did it justice.
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Date: 9/6/2020 1:55:00 PM
Some people are just evil... How sad people will do anything for money and so sad there is such a demand for animal artifacts
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Date: 9/5/2020 4:07:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, I think that is is cruel to kill an animal for no reason at all. Poachers should be caught and jailed. They kill animals for no reason. Hugs D\rlene
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Date: 9/5/2020 10:48:00 AM
While nature has its own set of sad values, poachers who take advantage of animals just trying to survive in sheer terror makes my blood boil! Heart wrenching story wonderfully crafted my friend! Animals are truly portraits of God's creativity! Sending you blessings. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 9/5/2020 8:40:00 AM
Sad, painful, nature's loss is everyone's loss. Powerful pen.
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Date: 9/5/2020 7:18:00 AM
Nature can be so beautiful and cruel at the same time...Well expressed here...including the human predators
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Date: 9/5/2020 7:11:00 AM
- Berg og Dal ... means mountains and valleys in Norwegian too ... so strange :) - It's awful to see the animals suffer - A lovely poem, dear soul sister :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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