Beneath the Totems

The honored dead lie in their graves
Silent beneath the sky
Storm clouds billow like threatening waves
The wind begins to sigh

Darkness falls o’er this resting place
Slowly the clouds descend
Totems stand with majestic grace
With strength that storms won’t bend

The Totems tell of noble lives
Of those who now are dead
They speak with pride and not with cries
No tears need now be shed

The spirits of the dead still live
Within the hearts of all
Strength and hope and peace they give
Beneath the Totems tall

by Steven Mossburg   8-13-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 12:39 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind words on my poetry Steven. Love, Carol
Ball Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 7:37 AM
This is beautiful Steven. Perfect rhyme, rhythm and balance. Great imageery. A fine piece. Congrats on your win. God Bless, JB
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 1:30 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Roberts' "Totems in the Darkening Sky" contest Steven. Love, Carol
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August 20, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Congratulations on your win! Great job Caryl Ramsdale
Gorelick Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 10:05 AM
This one of my very favorites..its such a peaceful read...BG
George   Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 6:07 AM
This is simply beautiful, Steven. When I lived in British Columbia, I saw many, and they always filled with with awe. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Quigley Avatar
August 20, 2011 at 12:11 AM
A really nice write Steven. Congratulations on your 2nd place finish.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:46 PM
Congrats Steven on your second place win in the Totem contest with this grand write luv..
Johnson Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 11:44 PM
Very, very nice Steven. Congratulations on a big win. Joyce
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2011 at 10:14 PM
congrats on your second place win in the contest Steven, great piece
Horne Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 3:34 PM
Lovely tribute to the Native Americans, Steven
Baity Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 6:27 AM
well written Steven...best of luck in the contest!!!!!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 10:17 PM
wow, you did really well with this topic. I could not even think to do it! BEst of luck in the contest!
Poet Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 10:27 PM
Very nice take on the contest photo Steven...best wishes.Thanks for your kind comment at my poem page.
Ross Jr. Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 6:32 PM
Awesome write mate...with love...old Jack
Sweetheart Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 12:18 PM
an elegant write Steven and one that touches the heart ...good luck in the contest with this touching piece so poignant luv..
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August 13, 2011 at 10:12 AM
This is powerful, well worded and has wrenching imagery. I'm sure it will place well in the contest, Stephen. Cheers from Cyndi
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