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Beneath the Sun's Flowered Fragrant Field

To love you in every fairest moment and kiss you tenderly in pure delight to yearn for you when you are absent and hold you closer in shadowed light love keeps us fondly in a warm embrace as dreams within the heart become unsealed passion will become a familiar face beneath the sun's flowered fragrant field we'll be devoted when our arms entwine like tender green leaves hold the morning's dew in the dawn soft glow your eyes always shine hummingbirds slow their flight when they see you the true beauty found in love is so clear a bond to be until we disappear

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/12/2023 11:25:00 PM

beautiful poetic words flowing here; congrats for the POTD

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/9/2023 11:15:00 PM

A beautiful, tender love sonnet Frederic. Congratulations on poem of the day you’ve earned it. Well done! ~ Belle

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/9/2023 6:11:00 PM

Such a magical moment, and you know it's love when, "hummingbirds slow their flight when they see you." This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Frederic, on Poem of the Day. My heart is floating. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/9/2023 4:19:00 PM

Frederick--what a beautifully penned poem!! My husband, Bill, read your poem to me this morning; we were both touched. Your poem spoke to us and our love and eternal bond. Congrats on poem of the day! Sara Etgen-Baker

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 4:30:00 PM

Sara, I am touched so profoundly and wish nothing but the best in your enduring love with Bill...thank you for your kindness

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/9/2023 2:56:00 PM

Beautiful, Frederick. Congratulations on POTD :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/9/2023 11:26:00 AM

So pretty… beneath the sun's flowered fragrant field. Congratulations on POTD, Frederick!

Ken Rone

Date: 3/9/2023 11:22:00 AM

Fredric - "...hummingbirds slow tbeir flight when they see you..." That is so imaginative! Totally it is a PODT worthy sonnet. Best - Ken

Arlo Parker

Date: 3/9/2023 11:15:00 AM

Sounds like this bond may go on forever...lovely POTD worthy piece, Mr. Parker. =;o]

Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/9/2023 10:59:00 AM

A truly romantic piece, Frederic, and a great selection for POTD. I love the alliteration in "flowered fragrant field".

Bill Baker

Date: 3/9/2023 9:20:00 AM

After reading your poem to my wife, I had to come back and tell you I added it to my FAV list. Truely a poem to be read often! Have a great weekend! Bill

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:51:00 AM

interesting time to read a poem, along with the bacon and eggs...Thank you, Bill

Bill Baker

Date: 3/9/2023 9:00:00 AM

Beautiful and enjoyable poem to read, Frederic. Congratulations on your POTD. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Thanks for a beautiful love poem to read to my wife at breadfast this morning. :-)

Constance La France

Date: 3/9/2023 8:37:00 AM

Frederic, your poem is so beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings, Constance

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:48:00 AM

Constance, dear poet thank you for your kindness to me and my poetry

Charles Messina

Date: 3/9/2023 7:07:00 AM

A beautiful sonnet, Frederic. My congratulations to you on POTD! Charlie

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:47:00 AM

thank you Charles

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/9/2023 6:32:00 AM

Awesome write Frederic. A well-deserved POTD. Congratulations! :)

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:46:00 AM

Awesome remark Linda, thank you

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/9/2023 5:05:00 AM

Oh, what joy your poem evokes....a perfect sonnet W. Shakespeare would have put his name on. Wonderfully crafted. Congratulations on your POTD. Paulette

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:45:00 AM

thank you so much Paulette

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/9/2023 4:09:00 AM

Well deserved! Congratulations Frederic on POTD honors for this classic love sonnet. Nice going buddy:)

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:44:00 AM

Thank you again, Daniel

Elizabeth Feeley

Date: 3/9/2023 3:56:00 AM

Congratulations Frederic on this POTD, filled with so much passion.

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:43:00 AM

Elizabeth, thank you

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/9/2023 3:40:00 AM

Frederick, a sweet romantic poem, congratulations on POTD!

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:42:00 AM

thank you Tania

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/9/2023 2:19:00 AM

Love the sweeping title and the rest just swept me off my feet. Very deserving of POTD. CHEERS, SuZ

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:41:00 AM

thank you Suzanne for your your kindness

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2023 1:41:00 AM

- What a beautiful sonnet, Frederic - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - A pleasure to read :) - hugs

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:40:00 AM

Sunshine I really appreciate your kindness

Jenna Logan

Date: 3/9/2023 1:28:00 AM

Dear Frederic, sparingly is my time spent here lately, but I'd be neglectful of your talent not to congratulate you on having written this charming potd. Romance personified, as you so eloquently write.

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:36:00 AM

Jenna, thank you for your very kind remark

Deb M

Date: 3/9/2023 12:59:00 AM

Congratulations On POTD Frederick for this lovely poem! Debx

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/9/2023 12:53:00 AM

“hummingbirds slow their flight when they see you” ~ (smiles) too good! Warmest congratulations on POTD, Frederic

Hello There

Date: 3/8/2023 4:23:00 PM

I am in agreement ~ classic and lovely. I, too, am a bit of a sucker for a love sonnet ; ) This one sweeps me away, and the song to match makes it even more impactful. Kudos and thanks for the fave!

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:32:00 AM

glad to hear from you Hello There, thank you for your kind remark

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/7/2023 5:35:00 PM

What a classic love sonnet this is, Frederic. I love it. Im a sucker for a good sonnet anyway:)

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:33:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel

Frederic Parker
Date: 3/9/2023 10:31:00 AM

Thank you, Daniel