JC Brul Poet Tetractys

Beneath the Moonlight

Dappled moonlight illuminates lovers
                                          beside old ford
                                          they lock eyes
                                            to breathe
                                               love;
                                               White
                                               roses
                                          dance in glee
                                        as they witness 
                              An affair to remember forever.



                                       2 September 2021

                       Double Tetractys 8 Poetry Contest ( Pic # 1)
                                    Sponsored by Eve Roper
                                              3rd place

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Sam Kauffman January 31, 2023 at 10:02 AM JCB congratulations on your win! There is so much going on in this poem - the scent of roses, eyes of lovers focused on each other; moonlight illuminating lovers! You have packed a thousand pictures and emotions into this poem! Well done dear friend. So wonderful to see it on the winners list! Blessings to you my friend!

Linda Alice Fowler January 28, 2023 at 7:24 AM Sweet memories. Congratulations on your win! :)

Valsa George February 7, 2022 at 8:37 PM Moon light fascinates lovers and under a moonlit sky many a memorable romantic drama is staged. 'Locking eyes'.... lovely expression.

Sam Kauffman September 14, 2021 at 11:49 AM Such a vivid picture of tender love in bright images JCB. Can almost hear the Moonlight Sonata in the background! Congratulations and blessings coming your way!

Reason A. Poteet September 10, 2021 at 8:04 PM Beautiful graphic presentation for the double tetractys. I kinda like the affair to remember forever when the days get lonesome and boring. Congrats.

Paula Goldsmith September 10, 2021 at 7:36 AM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Beneath The Moonlight" write. Have a blessed day..................

Eve Roper September 9, 2021 at 6:31 PM JCB, congratulations on your win. Your verse had great imagery, flow, and a change for the second stanza. Thank you so much for writing a verse for the contest. Hugs Eve JC Brul September 9, 2021 at 11:39 PM Thank you Eve...Your themes (through Pictures) are inspiring! More power to you.

Brian Strand September 9, 2021 at 12:27 AM A true tectractys JCB ..nice

Anitha Jayasankar September 2, 2021 at 10:55 AM So romantic, "they lock eyes to breathe love"... loved this dear JCB... Hugs... ~ Ani

Regina Mcintosh September 1, 2021 at 11:08 AM This is simply beautiful - I love it so... God bless you friend. Love, gina