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Beneath the Moonlight

Dappled moonlight illuminates lovers beside old ford they lock eyes to breathe love; White roses dance in glee as they witness An affair to remember forever. 2 September 2021 Double Tetractys 8 Poetry Contest ( Pic # 1) Sponsored by Eve Roper 3rd place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/31/2023 10:02:00 AM

JCB congratulations on your win! There is so much going on in this poem - the scent of roses, eyes of lovers focused on each other; moonlight illuminating lovers! You have packed a thousand pictures and emotions into this poem! Well done dear friend. So wonderful to see it on the winners list! Blessings to you my friend!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/28/2023 7:24:00 AM

Sweet memories. Congratulations on your win! :)

Valsa George

Date: 2/7/2022 8:37:00 PM

Moon light fascinates lovers and under a moonlit sky many a memorable romantic drama is staged. 'Locking eyes'.... lovely expression.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/14/2021 11:49:00 AM

Such a vivid picture of tender love in bright images JCB. Can almost hear the Moonlight Sonata in the background! Congratulations and blessings coming your way!

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/10/2021 8:04:00 PM

Beautiful graphic presentation for the double tetractys. I kinda like the affair to remember forever when the days get lonesome and boring. Congrats.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/10/2021 7:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Beneath The Moonlight" write. Have a blessed day..................

Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2021 6:31:00 PM

JCB, congratulations on your win. Your verse had great imagery, flow, and a change for the second stanza. Thank you so much for writing a verse for the contest. Hugs Eve

Jcb Brul
Date: 9/9/2021 11:39:00 PM