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Beneath the Lie

What lay beneath the lie each time you said goodbye. When you kissed my cheek and I was too meek to resist? What lay beneath the lie when flowers would arrive. Half dead carnations with the weekly shopping? What lay beneath the lie when we lay together you and I? Like statues cold and dead in the marital bed. What lay beneath the lie that made me want to die? You did not care for me. Looking back, it's clear to see. 21/02/2017

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Date: 2/25/2017 12:47:00 PM
Stong and silent not the answer...make noise throw things...make a man understand!...:)
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Date: 2/21/2017 1:03:00 PM
..... Use ... and throw ... food on the table and a roof over their head .... bye, bye - So sad, Jean - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2017 10:37:00 AM
It is easier to see now that you are out...his loss/ our gain
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/21/2017 11:28:00 AM
Bless you
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/21/2017 11:19:00 AM
I know now what was happening Tim. To our daughters he appeared the loving husband, as was his plan. The master plan was to leave me the moment the youngest turned 18.
Date: 2/21/2017 9:33:00 AM
At least he gave you three beautiful daughters, Jean:) Might as well face it, most men are pigs! Good luck in the contest.
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/21/2017 11:15:00 AM
That's true. But I feel compelled to disagree with your comment on the pigs, even though they consistently seem to prove me wrong. "Someday....my Prince will come."

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