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Beneath Subconscious Layer

Embedded beneath the subconscious layer, when the nascent eyes open to the first light as mortal journey begins with nothing in sight, the call waits with ordained words, ‘come here’. The call lies dormant and unheard deep within, as the murmuring stream of life flows slowly by, the cacophony of time mounts on the pitch high, the words lurk behind the music of mind serene. The inescapable echo of the call would articulate, when at timed appointment with destiny fearsome the clock is coded to stop, would finally come with the call ‘come’ that would silently resonate. When all sounds would dissolve in silence at sunset, the toiled eyes would close on the seraphic light, turning into the lighthouse beacon shining bright, the caller would finally beckon at the end of wait. Another ethereal journey would then begin forlorn for the soul to merge with the entity, the ultimate, to be transformed into the eternal blissful state in the sublime realm of euphoria, yet unknown.
Written : August 17, 2019 May 25, 2020 Contest : Brian's Choice T Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 8/23/2019 11:58:00 AM
Another beautiful write Subimal, congrats on another worthy winner!
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Date: 8/23/2019 10:27:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, love your quote, love your poem, well done !
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Date: 8/23/2019 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations for your great win Subimal. I love the first line of the 4th stanza )
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Date: 8/22/2019 11:30:00 PM
Congratulations my friend. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/22/2019 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful Silver medal Subimal! A beautiful pensive piece! xxoo
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