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Beneath My Feet

Leaves on the sidewalk Tumbled by brisk autumn breeze Gold beneath my feet

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Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/14/2010 2:08:00 PM

Really like your third line. This is a very cool and breezy description of autumn, which is perfect of course! Congratulations on your win!

John Freeman

Date: 9/12/2010 2:16:00 PM

Cool third place Haiku poem Barbara. Congratulations!! Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 3:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Barbara in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/7/2010 2:41:00 AM

congrats for this win with this fine Haiku. Harry

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:34:00 PM

lovely, congrats on your third place win

Ray Dillard

Date: 9/6/2010 12:14:00 PM

Congrats to you and may you enjoy your walk on the "gold" carpet with this win! RAY

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 10:53:00 AM

This was really cool, Barbara. Love that "tumbled" line and "gold beneath my feet" Hey, I got the book certificate just the other day. THANKS so much! Luv, Andrea ps and of course, congrats on your win here!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/6/2010 7:39:00 AM

now this is poetry, Lady Barbara! Congrats to you..well deserved

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/6/2010 4:06:00 AM

Absolutely stunning Barbara, congratulations on your win in Rick's Contest, love Wilma

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2010 10:00:00 PM

I love this haiku Barbara...beautiful, just beautiful! Congratulations on your win.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/5/2010 8:53:00 PM

Absolutely lovely.Many congrats for this win.

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/5/2010 7:43:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Barbara. Congratulations on your 3rd Place win. Peace, love, Audrey

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 6:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your third place win for this nice write, Barbara

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/5/2010 5:29:00 PM

Congrats, Barb. Nice going. Ralph

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/5/2010 5:27:00 PM

"Gold beneath my feet..." just beautifully expressed image. Congrats, dear Barbara. Love, iolanda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 5:02:00 PM

Congrats Barb on your big win in Rick's contest... lovely words ..enjoy a lovely win tonight ...with luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/5/2010 4:53:00 PM

Very nice Barbara. congratulations. Love, joyce

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 9/2/2010 5:27:00 PM

Nice ending to this. Otherworldly and etheral. Thank you for picking me and thank you for commenting on me. I liked your contest! Hope to do some more! Regards, Gerard

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/1/2010 2:23:00 AM

interesting concept, good luck in the contest. enjoyed this Haiku. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/31/2010 6:46:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Barbara. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/31/2010 5:53:00 AM

Wow Barbara, I love your approach, absolutely stunning the idea of "gold beneath my feet" :) Wilma

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/30/2010 8:47:00 PM

very nice, good luck in the contest