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Beneath My Feet

Leaves on the sidewalk Tumbled by brisk autumn breeze Gold beneath my feet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/14/2010 2:08:00 PM
Really like your third line. This is a very cool and breezy description of autumn, which is perfect of course! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/12/2010 2:16:00 PM
Cool third place Haiku poem Barbara. Congratulations!! Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/7/2010 3:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2010 2:41:00 AM
congrats for this win with this fine Haiku. Harry
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Date: 9/6/2010 4:34:00 PM
lovely, congrats on your third place win
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Date: 9/6/2010 12:14:00 PM
Congrats to you and may you enjoy your walk on the "gold" carpet with this win! RAY
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Date: 9/6/2010 10:53:00 AM
This was really cool, Barbara. Love that "tumbled" line and "gold beneath my feet" Hey, I got the book certificate just the other day. THANKS so much! Luv, Andrea ps and of course, congrats on your win here!
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Date: 9/6/2010 7:39:00 AM
now this is poetry, Lady Barbara! Congrats to you..well deserved
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Date: 9/6/2010 4:06:00 AM
Absolutely stunning Barbara, congratulations on your win in Rick's Contest, love Wilma
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Date: 9/5/2010 10:00:00 PM
I love this haiku Barbara...beautiful, just beautiful! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/5/2010 8:53:00 PM
Absolutely lovely.Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 9/5/2010 7:43:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Barbara. Congratulations on your 3rd Place win. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 9/5/2010 6:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your third place win for this nice write, Barbara
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Date: 9/5/2010 5:29:00 PM
Congrats, Barb. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 9/5/2010 5:27:00 PM
"Gold beneath my feet..." just beautifully expressed image. Congrats, dear Barbara. Love, iolanda
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Date: 9/5/2010 5:02:00 PM
Congrats Barb on your big win in Rick's contest... lovely words ..enjoy a lovely win tonight ...with luv..
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Date: 9/5/2010 4:53:00 PM
Very nice Barbara. congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 9/2/2010 5:27:00 PM
Nice ending to this. Otherworldly and etheral. Thank you for picking me and thank you for commenting on me. I liked your contest! Hope to do some more! Regards, Gerard
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Date: 9/1/2010 2:23:00 AM
interesting concept, good luck in the contest. enjoyed this Haiku. Harry
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Date: 8/31/2010 6:46:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2010 5:53:00 AM
Wow Barbara, I love your approach, absolutely stunning the idea of "gold beneath my feet" :) Wilma
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:47:00 PM
very nice, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:46:00 PM
Oh, so you have gold beneath your feet, pass it on at least one piece of gold, Barbara
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:45:00 PM
These Autumn poems are readying me for what I long for most.....that brisk walk ! Awesome poem ! ty james
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:35:00 PM
May you always walk with "gold beneath (your) feet," LNC. Excellent image and a great entry for Rick's contest. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn
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