Beloved Chaos

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bewitched or enchanted thoughts of him have me breathless so much that i could burst only his voice calms my restless mind obsession or addiction AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted on February 16, 2022 for contest S A STRAND (1075) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on February 12, 2022

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/19/2022 7:27:00 AM

Hi Line, I love you're acoustics to this poem and the pic of the woman on the beach. Belated congratulations.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/17/2022 5:30:00 AM

Great title. Addressing the chaos. Congratulations!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/17/2022 5:51:00 PM

Thank you very much, Christuraj ~

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 2/14/2022 11:17:00 PM

The answer to your questions is YES. I like this great poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/15/2022 6:56:00 AM

thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Timothy ~

Karen Croft

Date: 2/12/2022 1:20:00 PM

enjoyed your deep poem!

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2022 8:13:00 PM

Thank you very much, Karen.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/12/2022 11:15:00 AM

Hello Lin, yes the heart longs for love. wishing hoping this person is the right one. Or the feeling of being in love with the person is strong for both of them. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/13/2022 1:10:00 PM

Hello Lin, you are welcome. some of us take a while to find our true love. Hugs.

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/12/2022 8:14:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Darlene.