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Belmont Vista

Belmont wallows in westering twilight, sheep graze in cold pastures, hares scamper, ignoring a circling hawk. Blackpool's urban sprawl crawls off up to the scarred horizon, the Tower pricks the heavens like a syringe, spilling the blood-red sun. Evening falls, I'm all alone and free to stare, a wondrous, star-flecked firmament in phosphorescent flare!

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Date: 12/19/2008 8:38:00 PM
Great choice of words here. Especially the descriptive words like "phosphorescent". It paints such a scene. I think you've mentioned Belmont in other poems, it must mean a lot to you. Nathaniel
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Date: 12/19/2008 2:49:00 AM
Wowza, Keith I really loved this one! That second verse - whoa! You got me with this one, awesome visual and the red just pops. love Kristin
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Date: 12/18/2008 8:09:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you have painted, Keith. The imagery is rich and brilliant. Thank you for letting me see it through your eyes. So lovely! Love Robin
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