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Bells of Amazing Grace

Two months had passed since her brother died Eight weeks she had waited for his sign One he'd promised to send from above Assurance of his eternal love Not yet had she found a shooting star Or eyed a radiant glow from afar But this day on a New England beach A special connection seemed within reach A church steeple bell began to toll Causing teardrops down her cheeks to roll Wind chimes rang too, formed a symphony "Amazing Grace" was the melody The tune played at his funeral rites Rang out in cool wind beneath dusky skies His sister's eyes found a rainbow had grown It spanned o'er the lake to their hillside home 'Twas a gift from her most loving brother A 25-year AIDS sufferer And the bells brought her peace, gave her a smile Their spirits had reunited for a while *True story. I just visited a friend in New England. While we were at the beach a nearby church bell played "Amazing Grace." My dear friend cried, saying this was the sign she'd been waiting to receive from her brother who passed away just two months ago.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/23/2012 8:56:00 PM
yes, I remember this one, CArolyn. I came way back here to tell you that Linda has told me she unblocked you a while back. If ya ever want to try to contact her again. They are making a new hand for her to wear! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/13/2010 4:30:00 PM
Carolyn, Congratulations on your 1st place win with this amazing write. I am not surprized to see it in the top spot. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/10/2010 7:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place Carolyn.Such a tear jerking one. Very nice. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:05:00 PM
Congrats on the 1st place win~well deserved!!!!!
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:04:00 PM
simply a beautiful story/poem!!!!!~God bless~rick
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your 1st Place win in Paula Swanson's contest "Ding-A-Ling". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2010 5:38:00 PM
Such a touching well done write congrad's on your well deserved #1 WIN! Light & Love
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:42:00 AM
What an exquisite, sad yet hope-filled beauty this is, Carolyn...Congrats on your 1st place win...no surprise here! This poem and your recent mail is what inspired me to send the video to you - Tim
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:19:00 AM
very beautifully done Carolyn , congrats on your first place finish
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Date: 8/7/2010 5:34:00 AM
Very touching write, Carolyn-- super congrats on your top win with this piece-- l can relate to this well, just searching for that sign--how wonderful for your friend that she found it--& how wonderful that you were inspired to write about it-- thanks btw for all your nice comments, enjoy your weekend :)! nikko :)
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Date: 8/7/2010 1:47:00 AM
What a wonderful story and so beautifully penned, Carolyn. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie
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Date: 8/7/2010 1:43:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win with this beautiful write. Dan C
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Date: 8/6/2010 9:49:00 AM
I bet this placed high from comments I am reading. congratulations, CArolyn. And yes, of course, people will have to pay for health care, but it is a very necessary thing. wE are nearly the only industiralized nation without a good plan. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/6/2010 9:22:00 AM
A most desereved win Carolyn in Paula's contest. Amazing Grace, written by a poet and clergyman John Newton, is such a haunting but uplifting song. It's quite amazing hearing it to the Pipes and Drums playing it. It can brings tears on, believe me >> James
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:53:00 AM
Great piece , well told and well deserved win ..
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Date: 8/6/2010 8:35:00 AM
I just knew this would sail to the top....it is such an amazing story of Amazing Grace...as only you could tell so beautifully. Congratulations, Carolyn! Love, Carrie
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:11:00 PM
cute story...inspiring!
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:07:00 PM
Lovely story, Carolyn. Is this in that contest about rings, for the ringing of the bell?
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:20:00 AM
Dear Carolyn: Sad and wonderful poem. Aids is a very destructive disease. I pray that there will be a cure someday. Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:31:00 AM
This is a very touching poem Carolyn. I do believe it is possible to receive a message that crosses over. It is a beautiful story.
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Date: 8/4/2010 9:21:00 AM
Touching story Carolyn. Peace is indeed what is neccessary. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:38:00 AM
Glad that she got the assurance that she needed to feel closure...Blessed she is to have a friend who could write about it for others to feel her sorrow and healing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.."Flies On Silent Wings"...Rudbeckia is Black-eyed Susan(common name) ....It grows wild but I have cultivated variety in several places in my yard...Gold Finches enjoy the center when it starts to dry and go to seed...And I enjoy seeing the fleeting and rare glimpses of them..Sara
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:32:00 AM
Very touching write Carolyn, glad your friend found the comfort she longed for.. Thank you for sharing it with us, love Wilma
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Date: 8/4/2010 2:27:00 AM
true feelings as well, here penned. every single word seems to ring out in this wonderful poem, Carolyn. Harry
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Date: 8/4/2010 1:39:00 AM
Nice one
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