Bells of Amazing Grace

Two months had passed since her brother died
Eight weeks she had waited for his sign
One he'd promised to send from above
Assurance of his eternal love

Not yet had she found a shooting star
Or eyed a radiant glow from afar
But this day on a New England beach
A special connection seemed within reach

A church steeple bell began to toll
Causing teardrops down her cheeks to roll
Wind chimes rang too, formed a symphony
"Amazing Grace" was the melody

The tune played at his funeral rites
Rang out in cool wind beneath dusky skies
His sister's eyes found a rainbow had grown
It spanned o'er the lake to their hillside home

'Twas a gift from her most loving brother
A 25-year AIDS sufferer
And the bells brought her peace, gave her a smile
Their spirits had reunited for a while


*True story.  I just visited a friend in New England.
While we were at the beach a nearby church bell played "Amazing Grace."
My dear friend cried, saying this was the sign she'd been waiting
to receive from her brother who passed away just two months ago.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2012 at 8:56 PM
yes, I remember this one, CArolyn. I came way back here to tell you that Linda has told me she unblocked you a while back. If ya ever want to try to contact her again. They are making a new hand for her to wear! Luv, Andrea
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 4:30 PM
Carolyn, Congratulations on your 1st place win with this amazing write. I am not surprized to see it in the top spot. Aloha, Connie
Freeman Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 7:38 PM
Congratulations on your first place Carolyn.Such a tear jerking one. Very nice. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your 1st Place win in Paula Swanson's contest "Ding-A-Ling". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 5:38 PM
Such a touching well done write congrad's on your well deserved #1 WIN! Light & Love
Ryerson Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:42 AM
What an exquisite, sad yet hope-filled beauty this is, Carolyn...Congrats on your 1st place win...no surprise here! This poem and your recent mail is what inspired me to send the video to you - Tim
Roberts Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:19 AM
very beautifully done Carolyn , congrats on your first place finish
K. Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 5:34 AM
Very touching write, Carolyn-- super congrats on your top win with this piece-- l can relate to this well, just searching for that sign--how wonderful for your friend that she found it--& how wonderful that you were inspired to write about it-- thanks btw for all your nice comments, enjoy your weekend :)! nikko :)
George   Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 1:47 AM
What a wonderful story and so beautifully penned, Carolyn. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Lainie
Cwiak Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 1:43 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win with this beautiful write. Dan C
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 9:49 AM
I bet this placed high from comments I am reading. congratulations, CArolyn. And yes, of course, people will have to pay for health care, but it is a very necessary thing. wE are nearly the only industiralized nation without a good plan. LUv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 9:22 AM
A most desereved win Carolyn in Paula's contest. Amazing Grace, written by a poet and clergyman John Newton, is such a haunting but uplifting song. It's quite amazing hearing it to the Pipes and Drums playing it. It can brings tears on, believe me >> James
Kelly Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Great piece , well told and well deserved win ..
Richards Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:35 AM
I just knew this would sail to the top....it is such an amazing story of Amazing Grace...as only you could tell so beautifully. Congratulations, Carolyn! Love, Carrie
Culverhouse Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:11 PM
cute story...inspiring!
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:07 PM
Lovely story, Carolyn. Is this in that contest about rings, for the ringing of the bell?
Moribund Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Dear Carolyn: Sad and wonderful poem. Aids is a very destructive disease. I pray that there will be a cure someday. Yours truly: Sheol
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 10:31 AM
This is a very touching poem Carolyn. I do believe it is possible to receive a message that crosses over. It is a beautiful story.
Anish Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Touching story Carolyn. Peace is indeed what is neccessary. Yours Matthew Anish
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:38 AM
Glad that she got the assurance that she needed to feel closure...Blessed she is to have a friend who could write about it for others to feel her sorrow and healing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work.."Flies On Silent Wings"...Rudbeckia is Black-eyed Susan(common name) ....It grows wild but I have cultivated variety in several places in my yard...Gold Finches enjoy the center when it starts to dry and go to seed...And I enjoy seeing the fleeting and rare glimpses of them..Sara
Neels Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 6:32 AM
Very touching write Carolyn, glad your friend found the comfort she longed for.. Thank you for sharing it with us, love Wilma
Horsman Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 2:27 AM
true feelings as well, here penned. every single word seems to ring out in this wonderful poem, Carolyn. Harry
Torres Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:39 AM
Nice one
Rich Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Beautiful poetry you have written here enjoyed it and have a great night. Please read my new poem called: Mental S.
Goff Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 8:15 PM
spiritual, very eart-moving emotion, lovely! my friend! just like you! jimbo
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