Belle of the Ball

my new peach dress so fastidiously pressed in hope that a man will seek to caress Strauss’s Blue Danube calls reverberates through halls streaming from Michelangelo walls coy ladies smile bright eyes beguile captivating men’s attention for a while as gentlemen twirl them I, a lone femme feel humbled, an unwanted gem but wait a princely man approaches with rapid gait pounding of my heart will not abate laughter replaces loneliness this night he leads me to the floor beneath candlelight this welcome twist of fate feels so right liberated, we dance our prelude to romance my heart receives another chance swaying, he inhales my perfume scent of gardenias in full bloom with passion, we are both consumed gaiety undulates in each step we take if this is a dream, I dare not wake such precious bliss I could never remake
*Written November 16, 2014
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Roper Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 4:55 PM
Congratulations on your win,Carolyn, beautiful poem. Bless you
Meier-Hans Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 2:34 PM
Beautifully written poem with wonderful description. Congratulations on your win Carolyn.
Callus Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 12:02 PM
Hi Carolyn...back to congratulate you on your lovely win. I will be only too pleased to have that dance, if the offer is still open:) hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:56 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Lindley Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:21 AM
A truly wonderful write my friend. Your writes always have that high quality and smooth flow . I had my wife come over to read this one and she thinks its quite beautiful and very creative! Super 7 from me.
Vaso Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 9:34 PM
I came to read this one yet again! Love how this poem flows.
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2014 at 5:03 PM
Thanks for the visit to my page..I am sorry to be so long in responding back..Life has been a little different lately..Sara..Great contest entry ..Reads like winner..
Mcdaid Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 2:45 PM
truly very beautiful pen carolyn
Chircop Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 1:49 PM
I can picture you in that beautiful ball dress sweet Carolyn..What an amazing poem.Adding it to my fvs-Hugs Charma
Callus Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 3:21 PM
You will always be the belle of the ball dear Carolyn! you deserve to be...it's not the outside beauty only that counts. This is a beautiful write! It is so good of both you and Jan to share the same peach dress:) love and hugs // paul
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November 18, 2014 at 2:00 PM
I would love to share a dance with you, Paul. I feel like I know you so well from co-writing poetry. Inner beauty lasts forever and you are definitely blessed with that, my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 12:23 PM
this is so romantic Carolyn fantastic pen hugs 7
May Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 6:49 AM
Well penned Carolyn...love the rhyme scheme...best wishes
Smith Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 6:46 AM
A grand time...hope it isn't a dream...hugs Tim
Devonshire Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 3:16 PM
Just a combination of wishful thinking and experiences from years past, Tim. Thanks for reading.
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:51 AM
you twirled your pen to lead the ball Belle of the Ball Carolyn. Hugs! Take care XXXXX RAJAT
Locksley Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 12:50 AM
I wouldn't want to wake up either. What a delightful interpretation of the picture! Good luck in the contest.
Vaso Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 11:23 PM
I just loved this southern tale, and I am sure without any doubt you would be the belle of the ball anywhere you went!
Peterson Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Life, I suppose, is full of such wishes for suspended moments. But I can only hold my breath for so long, for I must exhale for breathing in deeply once again. I enjoy your poetry so much.
Bear Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 8:36 PM
Great visual in the poem Hope it is a winner. Makes one want to dance the night away Hugs Edith
Goff Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 6:10 PM
Yes, this is pure sweet delight, Carolyn! jmg
Allison Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 4:16 PM
beautifully descriptive Carolyn ... we have identical peach dresses and titles - immaculate taste i think LOL Hugs jan xx Good luck in the contest:-)
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