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Believe-Waltz Wave


From
the stairs
those 
little
voices call
Did he
come?
Christmas
morning cries
of delight and
surprise from
those who
still
believe
child ,adult
alike
smile
with good
will

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James Inman

December 30, 2015 at 2:46 PM

I believe, Barbara. Sweet write.

Michael Tor

December 30, 2015 at 2:24 PM

Congratulations Barbara on your win!

Viv Wigley

December 30, 2015 at 1:36 AM

Love the innocence in this, Barbara. Congrats! Viv x

Skat A

December 29, 2015 at 9:54 PM

BARBARA, a beautiful win.... Congrats on your placement. Love **SKAT**

Janice Canerdy

December 29, 2015 at 9:17 PM

Your poem paints a nice picture. Congrats on placing, Barbara. Janice

Robert Stoner Jr

December 29, 2015 at 4:42 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful entry, well done. Happy New Year.

Andrea Dietrich

December 29, 2015 at 4:31 PM

this is wonderful. Congrats for a great win, Barbara.

Jan Allison

December 29, 2015 at 1:57 PM

This is delightful Barbara:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

December 29, 2015 at 1:03 PM

You portrayed a perfect Christmas morning, Barbara! Congrats on your 3rd place win and thank you for participating! Happy New Year! Love, Kim

Reason A. Poteet

December 18, 2015 at 8:30 PM

touching piece. I am impressed by the simplicity of hthis form, new to me. Great brevity form. I enjoyed you sweet message of Christmas expectations, Barbara.