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Being Without You

I do not know how the rest of the days will be, but I know they will be without you, I do lovingly caress pillow beside me, and shed tears at emptiness I see, when I walk past memory lane near rose garden, I feel my heart tug and feet harden, when the rain thunders in, washes bedroom window, still draw curtains so you wouldn’t know, sometimes I sit in our garden swing, all alone, and think of that shared icecream cone, Lost love in life is such a deep grief to endure, only time can heal, may slowly cure.... 3rd placement written 25/04/2021 Grief in 12 lines Line Gauthier sponsored syllable count 12, 9 alternate lines

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Date: 4/30/2021 10:11:00 AM
Beautiful lines of parallel emotions Krish. This is a perfect form for sharing your memories and your loss. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/30/2021 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Sam! Much appreciate your kind words and support! My regards Krish
Date: 4/25/2021 1:43:00 PM
A fine penned piece on a difficult subject Krish, very well-penned with nice rhyme and flow. Blessings, Gordon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/25/2021 2:26:00 PM
Gordon Thanks. Delighted to have you read and give such positive words of support! My good wishes.
Date: 4/25/2021 6:14:00 AM
Grief removes something from your inner spirit. It doesn’t go away, but comes back often every bit as strong and heartbreaking as ever. Your poignant words speak of experience. Very well written.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/25/2021 8:36:00 AM
Dear Peter, thank you. Yes, a recent experience that may hurt a while. Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 4/25/2021 4:34:00 AM
Grief is one of the hardest things we have to deal with, time eases the pain but it never really goes away. Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/25/2021 8:35:00 AM
True Tom! A dear one lost is a ‘ to the end of our days loss’! and comes to haunt us in so many ways!! Thank you for your read and comments. Hope you are well!

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