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Poetic Form: Sijo

Inspired: 2021 April 30

 

*1st Place*
All Yours (May 11)
Contest Judged: 2021 May 10
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

*3rd Place*
Writing Prompt - Breathe
Contest Judged: 2021 May 09
Sponsored by: Constance La France

 

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Tryst edged ... Aurora whisper serendipitous saffrons, e'er forging balms beamish strands to aerate crown's expanse, whilst bestrewn lissome mists waltzes amongst errant gasp caught in rapture. An ephemeral cloudburst evaporates on supine silhouettes of the gods. Pristine manna with a sigh ... midst hollow utter, guides dulcet zephyrs to petrichor arousals. Purged euphoric realm steep in its prismatic solitude poise, waft chimerical imagery effervescent caprices, volley afar ... harks labyrinths mellifluous murmur. Vesper, yon the zenith of Terra, breathe his claim toward the cosmos, granting resplendent panacea a vestured vault, ... occasions an epiphany as moonglade o'er a lake.

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Date: 9/22/2021 9:40:00 PM
You write with such depth, William, great example for your contest:)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/22/2021 10:18:00 PM
I'm appreciative, Jo, of your thoughtful expressions my friend, Aloha!
Date: 5/11/2021 5:11:00 PM
William, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with your wonderfully penned poem, well done, peace _Constance
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Date: 5/11/2021 5:21:00 PM
Thanks, Constance, my admired stamina of you in your acknowledgments ... defining quality for a sponsor, Aloha!
Date: 5/10/2021 11:25:00 PM
Lovely poem William....Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/10/2021 11:53:00 PM
Gracious of you, Carol, thank you, my friend, Aloha!
Date: 5/10/2021 10:31:00 PM
This a beautiful Poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/10/2021 10:39:00 PM
I'm grateful, Christuraj, thank you, my friend, Aloha!
Date: 5/10/2021 10:27:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on your wonderful poem. Blessings. Anisha Dutta
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Date: 5/10/2021 10:37:00 PM
Much appreciated, Anisha, thank you, my friend, Aloha!
Date: 5/2/2021 10:37:00 AM
Great use of the words in Constance contest, William. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/2/2021 11:15:00 AM
I am grateful for your considerations, Eve, thanks for the boost, Aloha!
Date: 4/30/2021 8:09:00 PM
This reminds me of another excellent poet, Winged Warrior. Gone but not forgotten. Well done, William and good luck!
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Date: 4/30/2021 8:48:00 PM
A poignant moment, Daniel, unbelievable at first, he is missed. My heartfelt thanks truly, and the uplift to boot, Aloha!
Date: 4/30/2021 7:42:00 PM
Another level! Superb!
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Date: 4/30/2021 8:42:00 PM
Many thanks, US, appreciate your share, Aloha!

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