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Being Human 2

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Brotherhood and sisterhood endowed on our planet Earth should mean that we help each other survive, not only In times of crisis, but that we recognize that humanity Needs to be nurtured with all races feeling equal as they are in God's eyes; Gods that differ in different countries and cultures. Heaven, or our own version of hell awaits us in our afterlife as we Un-burden our souls from our bodies at our time of death Manifesting our oneness with our creator as we view our good And bad deeds flash before us with great emotional understanding, Never feeling closer to our fellow human beings than in that oneness. July 8, 2016 Being Human Acrostic Contest Sponsor John Hamilton

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/17/2016 9:25:00 AM

This version is very different to your previous effort, Connie...more on the spiritual side, but I like both of them. I see that it IS a winning poem, so congratulations are in order! ~ Best regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2016 12:38:00 PM

Great one!! Reads like winning material..Way to go..Winners' list awaits..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/16/2016 11:04:00 AM

Congrats! My friend Connie...wow...Excellent acrostic...every word well said...god bless...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/14/2016 1:38:00 PM

- A wonderful poem with messages about being a fellow human and share love, Connie - A big 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 7/13/2016 4:25:00 PM

Yes I agree with all the comments a great poem x

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/13/2016 12:47:00 PM

Heartfelt poetry from you Connie. The words you've chosen should remind us all of our common bond...regardless of our country, culture or station in life. Nicely done !!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/11/2016 6:22:00 PM

Also so lovely! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2016 5:08:00 PM

A very well deserved win, Connie dear. (well, I know you won but am guessing it scored well). big congrats! It's sage and beautiful.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/10/2016 2:36:00 PM

a lovely acrostic Connie many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Thompson

Date: 7/10/2016 11:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.....Nice

John Hamilton

Date: 7/10/2016 11:53:00 AM

This was great Connie, thanks for your entry! Congrats on your fine placement!

Lu Loo

Date: 7/10/2016 10:38:00 AM

Connie, a beautiful acrostic and yes Heaven does await us in our afterlife :) congrats on your fine placement lady! :)-luloo

Judy Ball

Date: 7/10/2016 9:54:00 AM

WoW! Another great Acrostic for the contest. Wonderful expression and beautiful sentiments. Good luck on the contest. A big seven from me. Loved it. God Bless, JB

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/10/2016 7:05:00 AM

A 7 for this creative winning piece, Connie! Janice

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 7/10/2016 1:14:00 AM

Congratulations Connie..nice thought :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/9/2016 9:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your nice placement Connie! I was right! Happy to see it on the list! Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/9/2016 10:43:00 PM

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate that! ; )

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/9/2016 7:07:00 PM

I love the way your lovely Acrostic flows and what an inspirational message it brings us, Connie. I see you created this one for the contest, and I am sure it will be a winner! 7, Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/9/2016 8:26:00 PM

Yes, I wrote this because I felt my first one wouldn't be accepted as favorably. Thanks for your nice comment Sandra. Cheers, Connie ; )

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/9/2016 12:05:00 PM

Hi Connie, You have a well written acrostic with a good message. I enjoyed your take on what "being human " is. I'm sure I will see this in the winners circle .Good luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/9/2016 3:27:00 PM

Thank you so much for your encouraging words Alexis. Cheers, Connie ; )

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/9/2016 1:43:00 AM

Bless you dearest Connie. May the warmongers unplug their ears and listen to reason!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/9/2016 2:09:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios. Wish we could teach about egos in school. Bless you too my friend. ; )