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Being Frank

My boyfriend his first name is Frank he claimed that he worked in a bank I know that is barmy Cos he’s in the army - He dropped me at home in a tank! 7/30/19
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Messina Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 9:20 PM
LOL...Love it Jan. Good luck in the contest...hugs // Charlie xx
Thompson Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 1:08 PM
Cool! Funny too! Best wishes Ron
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 9:17 AM
Ha ha, cute! Hugs Rick
Cunningham Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 2:48 AM
Nice one Jan, reminded me of that soldier in Russia that pinched a tank and went on a wrecking spree and they couldn't stop him until it ran out if juice. Think his name was Frankov lol. Tom. Just back from.Cardiff, Caleb now at grabbing stage, glasses, ears, hair lol
Mankasingh Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 7:30 PM
Love it plain and simple and is poignant at the same time. Xxxxooo
May Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 7:20 PM
He's an army banker..lol ...Nice one Jan..
Leffanta Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 6:43 PM
And then, alas, he lost rank! I think the MASH Frank ruined life for all Franks, don't you? Aloha! Rico
Merryman Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 4:27 PM
Good one, Jan! It made me laugh! Kim M.
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 5:32 PM
thanks Kim so lovely to see you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 4:06 PM
ha! perfect rhythm, jan, and very funny!
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 5:32 PM
I've learned an awful lot since joining soup!!!:-) hugs jan xx
Sands Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 2:11 PM
LoL Good one Jan! :)
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 5:30 PM
thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Faulkner Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 1:34 PM
A tank is an impressive ride :)
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 5:30 PM
I've got a pic somewhere of me sitting in a tank - was wearing a bikini top - no wonder the soldiers were happy for us to sit in it lol lol:-) hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 10:25 AM
Awesome! You just get better and better. Gotta love that pickup line of Frank's!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 9:08 PM
Personally the quickness doesn’t bother me. Some times you know it’s right. Other times you dive into edits or delete. You are a talent!
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 5:28 PM
I wrote this in 2 mins as i do with many of my limericks:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 9:06 AM
So romantic, Jan. He's a keeper!
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 5:28 PM
thanks Line:-) hugs jan xx
Y. Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:29 AM
Lol! Jan, This is funny. It made me chuckle:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 5:28 PM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 8:26 AM
Lol! ;D, Cute one! xomo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 6:39 AM
Huzzah! The two minute to bedtime poem! Awesome :)))
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 5:28 PM
thanks Mo, I was just going to bed last night and got this idea - took me 2 mins to get it written:-) hugs jan xx
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