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My boyfriend his first name is Frank he claimed that he worked in a bank I know that is barmy Cos he’s in the army - He dropped me at home in a tank! 7/30/19

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Date: 7/31/2019 9:20:00 PM
LOL...Love it Jan. Good luck in the contest...hugs // Charlie xx
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Date: 7/31/2019 1:08:00 PM
Cool! Funny too! Best wishes Ron
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Date: 7/31/2019 9:17:00 AM
Ha ha, cute! Hugs Rick
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Date: 7/31/2019 2:48:00 AM
Nice one Jan, reminded me of that soldier in Russia that pinched a tank and went on a wrecking spree and they couldn't stop him until it ran out if juice. Think his name was Frankov lol. Tom. Just back from.Cardiff, Caleb now at grabbing stage, glasses, ears, hair lol
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Date: 7/30/2019 7:30:00 PM
Love it plain and simple and is poignant at the same time. Xxxxooo
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Date: 7/30/2019 7:20:00 PM
He's an army banker..lol ...Nice one Jan..
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Date: 7/30/2019 6:43:00 PM
And then, alas, he lost rank! I think the MASH Frank ruined life for all Franks, don't you? Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/30/2019 4:27:00 PM
Good one, Jan! It made me laugh! Kim M.
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Date: 7/30/2019 5:32:00 PM
thanks Kim so lovely to see you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2019 4:06:00 PM
ha! perfect rhythm, jan, and very funny!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2019 5:32:00 PM
I've learned an awful lot since joining soup!!!:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/30/2019 3:25:00 PM
Lovely limerick, Jan. Hugs xx
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Date: 7/30/2019 5:31:00 PM
thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2019 3:06:00 PM
Haha I remember a friend who was a teacher was chatting up a girl... he said “I’m a helicopter pilot!” We just laughed in his face! Smashing limerick!
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Date: 7/30/2019 5:31:00 PM
lol Nina, I've got a pic of me sitting in a tank - was aged about 18 and on holiday in Southampton:-) lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/30/2019 2:11:00 PM
LoL Good one Jan! :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2019 5:30:00 PM
thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/30/2019 1:34:00 PM
A tank is an impressive ride :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2019 5:30:00 PM
I've got a pic somewhere of me sitting in a tank - was wearing a bikini top - no wonder the soldiers were happy for us to sit in it lol lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/30/2019 10:25:00 AM
Awesome! You just get better and better. Gotta love that pickup line of Frank's!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/30/2019 9:08:00 PM
Personally the quickness doesn’t bother me. Some times you know it’s right. Other times you dive into edits or delete. You are a talent!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2019 5:28:00 PM
I wrote this in 2 mins as i do with many of my limericks:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/30/2019 9:06:00 AM
So romantic, Jan. He's a keeper!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2019 5:28:00 PM
thanks Line:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/30/2019 8:29:00 AM
Lol! Jan, This is funny. It made me chuckle:-) Alexis
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2019 5:28:00 PM
thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/30/2019 8:26:00 AM
Lol! ;D, Cute one! xomo
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 7/31/2019 6:39:00 AM
Huzzah! The two minute to bedtime poem! Awesome :)))
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/30/2019 5:28:00 PM
thanks Mo, I was just going to bed last night and got this idea - took me 2 mins to get it written:-) hugs jan xx