Being a Raindrop

I float through the air, amazed at how cool I am feeling
Landing on the top of an oak. She lets me slide through her trees.
I ooze under a couple of ants, who give me barely a glance.
I am from heaven, I want to say, but that might be arrogant.
So I keep oozing, without a word, silent, and steady.
Another raindrop splashes on my face. What the heck!
Now I do not know where I end and she begins. She smirks and laughs.
If there is one thing I do not like it is ….
Bam! We are assaulted with ten more raindrops.
What the heck! I had no idea this could happen.
CRACK! Zeus is driving a chariot through the sky apparently.
The sky gets dark. I am sloshed down the tree, landing on the ground.
Still unsure whether I am still me, or just a part of them.
I am Delaware, another raindrop tells me. She asks what has happened.
I have no idea. Even if I knew in another incarnation, I do not have words now.
I am a cold, wet, unhappy raindrop, oozing into a slithery mud puddle.
A fat ugly worm begins rolling into me. Making my day even less perfect.

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Date: 2/16/2021 11:57:00 AM
This one I totally relate to Caren, I often wonder if all the tiny particles of water on the planet are somehow connected to each other, your poem says yes, fluidic thinking, fantastic poem, cheers David
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/16/2021 10:03:00 PM
Thank you David. I appreciate it.
Date: 2/16/2021 9:35:00 AM
- Sounds like a bad day, Caren ... wet and cold - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/16/2021 10:03:00 PM
Just a regular day these days.
Date: 2/16/2021 7:41:00 AM
Sometimes, I feel like your raindrop.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/16/2021 10:03:00 PM
I know that's right.
Date: 2/16/2021 5:08:00 AM
Poor little raindrop has become a puddle full of drowning worms. Cute one Caren. God Bless, JB
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/16/2021 10:03:00 PM
Thank you Judy.
Date: 2/15/2021 10:03:00 PM
Perhaps I was one of those raindrops that fell beside you.. (lol) Thanks for stopping by, Caren. Hope all is well,,,PS: you are cool :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/16/2021 10:04:00 PM
All is pretty well. Thanks Charles. I feel you are cool too!
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