Behold the Sun of Gold

With wistful EYES I watched him RISE;  the dawning sun
Aloft, he TREAD, golden wings SPREAD, and day had begun
Above the GLADE, he was robed in a SHADE of palest pink
I wrote a RHYME before the drying TIME of my indigo ink

My eyes SQUINTED to skies blue TINTED, I watched him soar
Eager to ABSORB the heat of the ORB, he warmed every pore
With my need SATED, I was ELATED and stood quietly in place
Cheeks of peach BLUSH, the sun's BRUSH painted on my face

Then he DISAPPEARED, and as I FEARED, grey clouds hovered
I was FILLED with remorse, and CHILLED once he was covered
I called to the WIND and he THINNED the dark overcast skies
So I could BEHOLD the sun of GOLD before tears filled my eyes

Call it a WHIM,  but I must search for HIM throughout the day
Across MEADOWS, I live in SHADOWS; my life in sad disarray
until his vibrant LIGHT is within my SIGHT, I dwell in sadness
But when his rays BEAM at me, I SEEM suffused with gladness

As twilight BLOOMED, I was CONSUMED with apprehension
I could not PREVENT the sun's DESCENT nor quell my tension
Tonight I BELIEVE I will GRIEVE until he rises again at dawn
When I will GREET his SWEET warmth, shining upon my lawn.

I cannot EXPLAIN the depth of PAIN I feel when he is asleep
It's a VAGUE mystery; but a PLAGUE that causes me to weep
I CONFESSED that I'm OBSESSED; under a spell or incantation
Tell me FRIEND, do I DEFEND or END my sunlight infatuation



November 7, 2020
Joseph May's In Rhymes Sublime Contest
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Watt Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 10:18 AM
Jenna, I loved reading your love song to the sun... I share many of these feelings. I really liked all your internal rhymes and how carefully your constructed this whole poem to flow so well. Belated congratulations on your win, my friend.
Kauffman Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Wonderful rhyming Jenna using many very original rhymes. A day without sunshine is a day without life. You have a good "sunlight infatuation!" Time to grab the sunglasses! Congratulations on your win!
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 9:30 AM
Congrats on this great winner. Sara
Fowler Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 7:46 AM
This is a great one Jenna. A Sun child :) I enjoyed it! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Logan Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Hi Linda, and thank you so very much.
May Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 6:06 AM
I love the warmth of your infatuation Jenna, Congrats on your win..
Logan Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Thank you very much, Joseph. I am truly honored.
Kendrick Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 7:59 AM
Reads like a good contender. Way to go for the contest. Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to comment. Sara
Logan Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 12:21 PM
Thank you, Sara, and you're welcome. I enjoyed reading you.
Wolf Avatar
November 9, 2020 at 6:21 PM
These are positively brilliant rhymes, Jenna! Superb. G.S. in the contest! (S = Skill!) Sunlight and Splendor, Gershon
Logan Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 3:37 AM
Thank you so very kindly for your accolades, GW. They're sincerely appreciated.
Cunningham Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 1:05 AM
Brilliant Jenna, you've certainly rose to the challenge, Good luck. Tom. Decided a day off today, PAINT I AIN'T, well that's my first line lol.
Logan Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 3:37 AM
It was such a fun challenge, Tom. Thank you, and I hope your painting is over.
Mcconnell Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 11:42 AM
Great inspiring piece Jenna, super rhyme and insightful thought too with good expression. Hope all is well, blessings always,Gordon
Logan Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Thanks for the many kudos you've offered, Gordon, Thank you.
Hamilton Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 11:13 AM
I love internal rhymes they're probably my fave style of rhyme, so...I loved this one Jenna, should do well in the contest!
Logan Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Hi John. Thank you for liking my internal rhyme poem. It was more fun than I thought it would be. Loved the contest theme.
Koplin Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Well written and nice rhyme! Great Job Jenna!
Logan Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 9:37 AM
Thank you so very much, Mark. Your comments are always encouraging.
One Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 8:41 AM
I think you need to find a balance my friend... too much and too little, is never good enough
Logan Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 9:36 AM
Yes. No pasty white skin, nor sunburn. A natural tan is best...and a balance in all things is usually best.
Gondolf Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 8:08 AM
This is a rhyme sublime, Jenna, good luck in the contest, it's a winner in my book. Have a great weekend. Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 9:35 AM
Hi John. It was lots of fun to write this one. I loved the challenge and win or not, I enjoyed the contest theme. Thanks for your ever present support.
One Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 6:46 AM
I think you have a dilemma here...nice internal rhymes and theme to your poem...
Logan Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 7:07 AM
Do I defend or end? lol I can be a sunworshipper but not to this this extent! Thanks for leaving comments.
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