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Behold The Sun

Behold the sun and all its authority, great manufacture of God behold God’s man and all his impurity prototype written on fluid stone – the earth, its belly of churning, belching~ dis-pleasured groan….

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Date: 3/24/2025 2:14:00 PM
What is time.? More than a word.' Yet with Words we attempt to reveal.' And He allows A work to be done.' On us all; each and everyone!
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Date: 3/22/2025 12:55:00 PM
Wow! Says much! … prototype written on fluid stone
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/23/2025 7:46:00 AM
Hi Kim; we are all subjects for change. Thank you, my friend.
Date: 3/22/2025 8:37:00 AM
How many of his favours can you deny? There is so much that can be said in response to your words... but youve kinda already said it..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/22/2025 8:52:00 AM
Thank you, Si; given a palace of creation -- roaches and rats will someday rule the world. Thank you, my friend.
Date: 3/22/2025 3:13:00 AM
Dear Joe what a deep and profound write this is that conveys so much in such a soulful manner. What valsa said below i agree with that, as she has said exactly what i think, i really love the way you’ve written “ Behold the sun and all its authority, great manufacture of God” brilliant opening! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/22/2025 8:54:00 AM
Thank you, IE; I wrote three funny ones before this...just to keep my sanity. Blessings my friend.
Date: 3/21/2025 8:54:00 PM
God created man as the crown of creation. But man degraded himself and stays inferior to many other created beings and things. It is sad. Joe, you state blunt truths.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/22/2025 8:56:00 AM
There's hope...if not for humanity, then for the blessed individual, who relates thankfully, to the countless gifts and love of good.
Date: 3/21/2025 6:01:00 PM
Good one Joe. Like the ending.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/22/2025 9:06:00 AM
Thank you, Oliver. It's all up to us. God made this gracious world...made His man in His own miraculous image, given them sovereign power over devils -- the worship is our choosing....
Date: 3/21/2025 3:28:00 PM
Ha, ha. Sunny day up there, alright ~ Tim Bell Cher
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/22/2025 8:58:00 AM
Positive attitude is always best! Sunny side of the street and all that.... Blessings my friend. Have a glorious writing day!

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