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dying rose poured out its sublime fragrance enlivening space through the wafting breeze enacting joyful dance of innocence vibrant in fullness, till it’s breath does cease joy, devoid of sense of separation souls prayerful rapturous celebration 18-May-2021 Charm me poetry contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 5/27/2021 10:43:00 AM
Amazing life perceptions as always Seeker. This reminds me of The Giving Tree with your rose joyfully pouring out all it has to give as it walks through its life journey. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/24/2021 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and rose picture. You did charm me. Have a blessed day/week...............
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Date: 5/23/2021 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations, US, in Line Gauthier's "Charm me," contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/23/2021 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! :)
Date: 5/18/2021 1:47:00 AM
Like it is making a last effort to impart fragrance.
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