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I have written this story from the perspective of the house telling the story.

 

Behind the Yellow Door

Looking out at the old oak  tree in my front yard today, I finally realize I, like she, has been stripped of all my former beauty by the passing of the seasons. 

I know you may find it hard to believe that I once was as beautiful as a Southern Belle and as eloquent and demure as one could ever be. BUT TIME CHANGES EVERYTHING! 

A family once lived between my walls...(Mama and Papa.) I can still hear their voices; and the children, Bobby and Mary Beth. Today, I imagine I see them playing outside the yellow door; yellow because it is Mama's favourite colour.  She says it is the colour of joy. 

I know it is just memories that bring them back to me for fleeting moments in my old age, but these memories are all I have left, and they bring me much comfort.   

But the truth of the matter is, they are all gone but Mama.  Mary Beth grew up and became a journalist, living her dream of globe-trotting. Her Bicycle still stands beneath those barren limbs of the old oak tree, waiting like me for her return.   

I believe it was the sound of silence that fell between Mama and Papa and the soft weeping that crept from their separate bedrooms in the night that finally drove Mary Beth away. 

If only one could erase one day in time, it would be that summer morning when Bobby left to go fishing with his buddy, Eddie.

But the fish went on to live another day when one intoxicated individual behind the wheel of a  speeding vehicle rounding the bend in the road lost his grip on reality and sent another unsuspecting child of God before his time...to Heaven. 


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The heavyweight of the grief that followed that tragedy, over time,  finally broke through the fabric of the family, leaving a hole that no amount of mending could repair. 


Papa's heart finally broke 13 years later.  He died on the same day that thirteen-year-old Bobby died.  

Mama is still alive, living for those two weeks a year each summer when Mary Beth takes a break from her globe-trotting and comes home. Mary Beth is a well-known journalist now, one year away from her 65th birthday with no thoughts of retiring.  

In celebration of these occasions, Mama puts a fresh coat of yellow paint on my door and sits in her rocking chair on my porch, counting the hours and minutes until Mary Beth arrives.


Mama is old and frail now, as am I, and I wonder if she will make it through another winter; and as I look out at those barren limbs on the old oak, I wonder if my door will ever wear another coat of joy? 

THE END




Author:  Elaine Cecelia George
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 3/15/2022 3:39:00 PM
Gave me joy and deep sorrow in this beautiful Personification, Elaine. Time changes everything in this world. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 3/16/2021 11:30:00 AM
Remarkable piece of tragic yet beautifully dignified and powerfully evocative writing...really is quite elegant for all its sadness. I stand in awe! My very best regards Elaine. :) john P.s yellow is my favourite colour too.
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Date: 3/18/2021 8:38:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, John...much appreciated.
Date: 1/4/2021 7:43:00 AM
What an amazing story, of both joy and sorrow. Captured the readers heart...
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Elaine George
Date: 1/10/2021 4:33:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Akkina...and for your comments. ~ Elaine
Date: 12/21/2020 6:40:00 PM
Such an amazing personification, dear Elaine.. Really enjoyed! Incredibly superb and so heartfelt.. Your talent shines my friend! Many blessings to you.. Happy Holidays!
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Date: 1/2/2021 3:57:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by...and for your very kind comments. Wishing you the best year ever in 2021. ~ Elaine
Date: 12/15/2020 10:02:00 AM
It's no coincidence that Papa died on the same day Bobby did, even 13 years later. I still imagine late family members and sometimes these memories bring some job, but around the holidays it just makes mes miss them more. I worry that my older sister might die before me. Your message is sad and powerful, Lainy, for we all have people we miss. Beautifully penned. Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 12/27/2020 10:27:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by, Carolyn. So nice to hear from you. Wishing you the best year ever in 2021. ~ Elaine
Date: 12/14/2020 2:30:00 AM
This is truly a creative magnificent write, Elaine, the old house’s story tugs at the heartstrings. Best wishes, John
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Date: 12/27/2020 10:21:00 PM
Thank you for your very kind comments, John. Wishing you and yours the best year ever in 2021. ~ Elaine
Date: 12/11/2020 2:03:00 AM
A truly magnificent write Elaine from the heart of the house that sees and hears all, who’s job it is to keep her family safe and warm. Yet tragedy occurs, no fault of hers, but goodness how it hurts.... Belle
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Date: 12/12/2020 2:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Belle...much appreciated.~ Elaine
Date: 12/8/2020 12:03:00 PM
My dear friend, you have floored me with this creative and truly magnificent new offering. The closing stanza struck me so deeply. To look back at life and wonder. To imagine that old oak tree and its barren limbs. Yes such I too have done so very often. This is truly a gem. A fav.. God bless.
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Date: 12/8/2020 4:59:00 PM
So nice to hear from you dear, Robert. I was worried about you. Thank you for stopping by and for your always so kind comments... Take care my friend...and God bless. Elaine
Date: 12/8/2020 12:01:00 PM
My dear friend, you have floored me with this creative and truly magnificent new offering. The closing stanza struck me so deeply. To look back at life and wonder. To imagine that old oak tree and its barren limbs. Yes such I too have done so very often. This is truly a gem. A fav.. God bless.
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Date: 12/6/2020 6:36:00 PM
Elaine, the power of your poignant pen captured my heart's imagination and brought me to the center of the tender and tragic emotions of the "Southern Belle". I loved how the house is compared to the old oak tree; "I see myself as she is, stripped of all my former beauty by the passing of the seasons." So emotional, so evocative, so ingenious! Your poem hooked me there and it never let go! Writing the story from the house's perspective is an amazing point of view! Your artistry shines! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/31/2021 4:52:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Susan and for your much appreciated comments. ~ Elaine
Date: 12/4/2020 10:10:00 PM
A heartrending story told so creatively through the POV of the old house. A healthy dose of pathos, that brings to mind the tragedy of young death that shakes a family to its core. Enjoyed the read, Elaine. ~ John
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Date: 12/6/2020 1:53:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments, John...much appreciated. ~ Elaine
Date: 12/4/2020 4:40:00 AM
Painting both joy and sorrow, while peering at the old oak tree, You have captured well the essence of the photo Elaine, Excellent write
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Date: 12/6/2020 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph...Much appreciated. ~ Elaine
Date: 11/28/2020 9:57:00 AM
Very creative work. I am left with questions though. If Mary Beth is 65 now that would mean her mother would be maybe 85 so how old is grandmother maybe 105? Enjoyed reading this one. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2020 10:02:00 AM
There is no grandmother. It is the house telling the story. The family that lives within her, she knows as, Mama, Papa, Mary Beth and Bobby.. I did put an author's not above the picture. I was wondering how this would be perceived. Perhaps I need to revise. Thank you for your kind comments, Sara...Much appreciated.
Date: 11/28/2020 5:24:00 AM
This is a brilliant write, Elaine. It tugs the heart as the old house speaks. Most will relate to the emotions evoked and feelings touched. (I thought I commented on this poem earlier)
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Date: 11/28/2020 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, dear Vijay...and yes... you are correct...you did comment before. John Hamilton noticed a typo in it and I tried to edit it, but the system wouldn't allow me, so I had to delete the whole thing and re-submit.
Date: 11/27/2020 3:22:00 AM
A sad story, about life, loss and living... I like how you described it.. It is touching.
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Date: 11/28/2020 9:51:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, silent one...much appreciated.
Date: 11/26/2020 5:07:00 PM
This is such a well written story of a real family. Heart warming.
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Date: 11/28/2020 9:52:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments, dear Caren...much appreciated.
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