Behind the Neon Lights

I believed the whole world would welcome me when I left home, and moved to the city. But it wasn't like what I thought it would be behind its neon lights: there's no pity, while success doesn't come with a guarantee. I was disenchanted, to say the least, 'twixt expectations and reality. And my enthusiasm quickly decreased: as the cost of living caught up with me, and anxiety's climb sharply increased. Flying high, carried by the winds of hope, I shed the innocence that bound my wings. For, eager to do more than barely cope: no longer a puppet; I cut the strings that had over time morphed into a rope. Pinocchio had to learn the hard way that sometimes what we think we want the most, is, but an illusion: that fades away. For dreams continue to move the goalpost; whenever frustration comes into play.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Poteet Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 5:22 AM
Some lessons are best learned by participation rather than advice. Unfortunately for some, values and goals are exchanged for cheaper versions in the process. I love this quintain, so versatile with the ababa rhyme.
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November 19, 2020 at 6:15 AM
Thanks Reason, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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November 19, 2020 at 5:23 AM
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November 16, 2020 at 5:44 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Yes, we fight to get grown then we find out it is not so easy but most people make it. It is sad to see those that don't. Sara
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November 16, 2020 at 6:29 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.
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November 13, 2020 at 2:13 AM
A fantastic Quintain (Sicilian) Emile... ‘But hope manages to move the goalpost’ so true. A fine example for the contest. Regards Belle
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November 13, 2020 at 5:21 AM
Thanks Belle, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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November 10, 2020 at 3:35 AM
A wonderful example. God bless you dear friend :)
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November 10, 2020 at 7:47 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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November 9, 2020 at 2:02 AM
Thanks for sharing this muse with its truth and style... Indeed, the content and the form exemplify what your contest requires. God bless you.
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November 9, 2020 at 5:51 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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November 7, 2020 at 9:41 AM
Excellent styling of the form, Emile. I have always enjoyed quintain. There is another sponsor who used to have this kind of contest a lot. Was it Francine? a female and she often had us do this type!
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November 7, 2020 at 11:21 AM
Thanks Andrea, I don't recall Francine but I do like this format, although it can be difficult to compose, I look forward to reading you entry my friend, Emile.
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November 7, 2020 at 8:50 AM
Emile, what a wonderful poem and great example for your contest, I think, I know that I will love writing in this form _Constance
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November 7, 2020 at 8:58 AM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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