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Beginnings

A song which lights up minds and touches the heart Something like that is really a good start To building a tower on wings of pure love Build it high so it can be seen from above Build it strong so it will last forever When it comes to hatred we must really say never!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/28/2015 1:33:00 PM
Matt, I see you are trying for that iambic "beat" You achieved it here and there within this poem, which has a superb message of love.
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Date: 6/28/2015 11:12:00 AM
Beginnings always should start with all that is good. Loved the thoughts within this write, Matthew.
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