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The hills are greening Quiet murmurs stir the land Daffodils and hope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/10/2009 1:14:00 AM
Spring is waiting to get sprung!! Good haiku... ~ Arany
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Date: 2/5/2009 11:05:00 AM
Sounds like spring alright! Beautiful, I can't wait for it. A lovely haiku. Michael
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Date: 2/4/2009 2:23:00 PM
This is a great haiku, you paint the spring scene to perfection. Well done. Thanks for your nice comments on my one. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín
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Date: 2/3/2009 5:19:00 PM
Uplifting use of this concise form. Spring is the season of hope and new beginnings as presented here in a creative way. Enjoyed this one. Karen
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Date: 1/27/2009 2:08:00 AM
Just peeking through now BG, hereabouts.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/26/2009 12:17:00 PM
This is perfectly titled. You've written this exactly as it is. Lovely Haiku Love, Robin
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Date: 1/25/2009 8:03:00 AM
Love the hopeful feeling of new beginnings (perfect title). Moving and inspiring. You bring such life to the new season. Simply beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/25/2009 3:51:00 AM
yes! Awesome, I cannot wait for that feeling of rebirth. love, Kristin
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Date: 1/25/2009 3:38:00 AM
Nice imagery painted in the haiku BG, keep up the great work...Raul
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Date: 1/24/2009 3:53:00 PM
Big blooming flower beds of daffodils. I cant wait. Laurie
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Date: 1/24/2009 3:18:00 PM
I love the feel of new life and hope this poem a wonderful write! Good luck in the conest! Love Laura :)
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Date: 1/24/2009 3:09:00 PM
Yes, indeed! I love Spring. My favorite time of year. Well done, Barbara.
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Date: 1/24/2009 12:33:00 PM
Well named , haiku , Barbara , in perfect format ....
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Date: 1/24/2009 12:22:00 PM
I love the peaceful nature of this piece! Nicely done! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/24/2009 11:59:00 AM
The second line is great and this Haiku sings sweetly. Good write..Chris.
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