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Beginings

The hills are greening
Quiet murmurs stir the land
Daffodils and hope

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Arany P.

Date: 2/10/2009 1:14:00 AM

Spring is waiting to get sprung!! Good haiku... ~ Arany

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/5/2009 11:05:00 AM

Sounds like spring alright! Beautiful, I can't wait for it. A lovely haiku. Michael

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/4/2009 2:23:00 PM

This is a great haiku, you paint the spring scene to perfection. Well done. Thanks for your nice comments on my one. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín

Date: 2/3/2009 5:19:00 PM

Uplifting use of this concise form. Spring is the season of hope and new beginnings as presented here in a creative way. Enjoyed this one. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 1/27/2009 2:08:00 AM

Just peeking through now BG, hereabouts.Rgds Brian

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/26/2009 12:17:00 PM

This is perfectly titled. You've written this exactly as it is. Lovely Haiku Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/25/2009 8:03:00 AM

Love the hopeful feeling of new beginnings (perfect title). Moving and inspiring. You bring such life to the new season. Simply beautiful. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/25/2009 3:51:00 AM

yes! Awesome, I cannot wait for that feeling of rebirth. love, Kristin