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My light was dark and cold til you came in the door, then time fell through the floor. To you my soul I've sold, The price I'll pay, untold. My heart you'll soon restore. Til then my hope so true is our similitude. As life we mottle through, I'll share myself with you in life's short interlude. Then death we will exude. For you my only plea, are you my destiny? 08/31/15

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Date: 9/21/2015 2:12:00 AM
Wonderful write James n yet another superb win! Big congrats!
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James Inman
Date: 9/21/2015 9:50:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Sharma, Always nice to hear from you.
Date: 9/19/2015 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
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James Inman
Date: 9/21/2015 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Faye.
Date: 9/19/2015 4:56:00 PM
You got the meter right ON! Congrats in my contest. Nicely done.
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James Inman
Date: 9/21/2015 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, great contest.
Date: 9/19/2015 4:24:00 PM
James, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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James Inman
Date: 9/21/2015 9:47:00 AM
Thank you, SKAT.
Date: 9/19/2015 11:26:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats James:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 9/21/2015 9:47:00 AM
Thanks Jan
Date: 9/2/2015 3:11:00 PM
James, I know nothing about meter but this is beautifully penned and thanks for visiting my poem, nature heals ~~
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James Inman
Date: 9/2/2015 3:44:00 PM
BW, thank you. Always enjoy your poems. I have got to find time to go back and read some of your older work.
Date: 9/2/2015 11:57:00 AM
Better meter and rhyme than the first, James. Nice subject too. Goodluck!
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James Inman
Date: 9/2/2015 3:46:00 PM
I could have sworn I responded to this. Thank you Kim, and thanks for your help.
Date: 8/31/2015 8:38:00 AM
Wonderful verses of a noble soul winning our respect and desire to find news from your poetical creation.Best wishes.
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James Inman
Date: 8/31/2015 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Ovidiu.
Date: 8/31/2015 1:32:00 AM
beautifully penned but sad imagery - love the positivity in the final couple - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 8/31/2015 7:06:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I had a different one in the contest but the meter was all wrong so I decided to change it.

Book: Shattered Sighs