Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Before This Night Is Through

Beneath that frame you wear so well,
                                                                 are you a sinner or a saint
with that simmering of lust I smell
                                                                 although you show restraint?
You want me; soon you’ll show how much!
                                                                 The hunger is in your eyes.
I feel it in your tender touch
                                                                  I hear it in your sighs.
You can’t survive my full assault.
                                                                  You’re losing your facade.
It’s coming down; it’s not my fault!
                                                                  You’ll see you’ve been a fraud.
For underneath your skin, you burn.
                                                                   Soon you will be mine.
Before this night is through, you’ll learn,
                                                                   Burning is divine!


Oct. 27, 2017 for Brenda Chiri's  Poem Within A Poem Rhyme 2 
Contest
Now used for Laura Loo's 'Love Poem-Rhyme Only' Contest

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Line Gauthier February 24, 2018 at 6:14 PM Awesome delivery of a beautifully sensuous poem. Congrats on your most deserved win, Andrea.

Viv Wigley February 24, 2018 at 2:12 PM Hot stuff, Andrea, well done! Viv x

Tom Cunningham February 23, 2018 at 11:44 AM Big congratulations Andrea. Tom

Abdul Malik Mandani February 23, 2018 at 11:00 AM There's a song in Urdu: "Jab tak yeh raat gujrangi, tab talak asli chera samne aayenga." (By the time this night is through, your true face will emerge.) I like the way you presented this.

Beautiful Scars February 23, 2018 at 10:32 AM this was a challenge and you did it great! lovely poem all around sweet lady, thank you and congrats :) -luloo

Faraz Ajmal November 19, 2017 at 9:53 AM Such a beautiful written poem, you re one of my favourite poet and believe me your every poem is better than one another and this poem was no different and you end it really well

Line Gauthier November 16, 2017 at 9:32 PM Hot stuff! Wonderful - congrats on your win, Andrea.

Anand Parmale November 5, 2017 at 9:18 PM Wow...Such interesting poem...Loved the climax...

Subimal Sinha-Roy November 2, 2017 at 11:50 PM Congratulations, Andrea on your fine win.

Eve Roper November 2, 2017 at 9:16 PM Amazing, Andrea, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

John Gondolf November 2, 2017 at 3:32 PM Andrea, just checking back to congrats on your placement for this well done poem. John

Chris Hagy October 31, 2017 at 8:26 PM You little vixen you!...this is divine! have a great day :)

Judith S October 29, 2017 at 7:43 PM Andrea ... So impressive!! Really enjoyed reading this. Best of luck in the contest!! ~ Judy

John Fleming October 29, 2017 at 9:14 AM I always enjoy your capable verse, Andrea, in any format...and you compose in rhyme so very well - good stuff! My best wishes and warmest regards. :) john P.s I have left you some "Soupmail". :)

James Horn October 29, 2017 at 6:37 AM Always wonder why desires always have to be burning. Just met your friend ZenBruce515 on line. He is quite a guy and could not pass by. Read some of my new poems. God can see through any façade or acts of fraud. Jim Horn

Carol B. October 28, 2017 at 9:50 PM Andrea this is really impressive. This is a definite fav. :)

John Gondolf October 28, 2017 at 11:34 AM Great job, Andrea, I enjoyed reading your two poems. John

John Michaels October 28, 2017 at 6:20 AM You're so good at this!! Two great poems in one. Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 27, 2017 at 9:56 PM Hot diggety dog! Phenomenal job! You nailed it. Fantastic pen(s) Andrea, my best to you! Wow :) xomo!

Constance La France October 27, 2017 at 9:02 PM Andrea, so well done, best of luck on the contest

Russell Sivey October 27, 2017 at 8:50 PM Wow, this is expertly done my friend! I should have known you would write such a magnificent poem for this contest, you are so good at things like this, unique and creative ideas flow through you like the spring of the Earth! What a delightful poem you have written here! Great Work!!

Vijay Pandit October 27, 2017 at 7:54 PM Well executed--the two poems work well together--best for a win, Andrea!

Jan Allison October 27, 2017 at 6:05 PM Gosh Andrea you have written this challenging double rhyme superbly - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx