Before the Trek

A path appeared where I had set my gaze. It reached from distant times beneath the sun. To travel it took all one’s earthly days, and soon, I knew, my trek would be begun. The Tidings Wind was echoing through trees - those stalwart prophets fixed along the path. Humanity was sounding in the breeze their mingled cries of grief and joy and wrath. Though barely could I grasp the nature of the journey I would take, I felt the thrill of leaving home, for Father told me love would greet me there below with my free will. I’d stumble, but I trusted Him to place His signs to guide me back by light of Grace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Watt Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 10:24 PM
Wow, Carrie was calling you the Queen of Sonnets as far back as 2012 (see below)! I happen to agree with her (as you know) and this sonnet is another example of why I have come to feel this way. This is a really nice spiritual write, and another fave for me. I loved 'The Tidings Wind was echoing through trees', mixing destiny and nature and later, free will. Beautiful.
Arno Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 2:36 PM
Congratulations Andrea for another winning entry and a great write. Love, Jon
Richards Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 7:56 AM
Beautiful from the queen of sonnets!! Congratulations, Andrea!!
Eastman Avatar
March 30, 2012 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on a great write and win.
A   Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 7:09 PM
Andrea, Congratulations with your wonderful win.. in Brian's contest..xox~PD
Song Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 2:57 PM
Brian knows great poetry and this sonnet is g-r-e-a-t! (as Tony the Tiger would say!) Love, Gwendolen
Neels Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 12:04 PM
Hey there Andrea, congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest ;-) love Wilma
Guzzi Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 6:08 PM
My sonneteer! Congrad's Light & Love
Grisetti Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, on a well deserved win. Beautiful poem.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 4:26 PM
congrats Andrea on a super first place win for this wonderful write and creative venture luv..
Onclaud Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 2:25 PM
toppers, andie..so timely for near esater.. congrats big time on your won...:) hugggles!
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March 27, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win!- JH
Burch Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations,Andrea on your well deserved win in Brian's contest!! Beautiful...I like it...big huggsss sweetie,love~deb
Long Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 11:59 AM
congrats on your win cory
Brown Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 7:36 PM
the path is ever changing, sidestep n you are lost, cos life is rearranging, leave it reap the cost:)
Babcock Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 9:56 AM
Love the sonnet you have penned on life and death and beyond. love phyl
Pettit Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 8:25 PM
This is an excellent example of a well-written sonnet. It has everything.
. Avatar
January 14, 2012 at 2:09 AM
Wow...the calm and trusting emotion you presented here make this piece standout effortlessly Andrea
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January 12, 2012 at 4:51 PM
Loved this Andrea hugs and best wishes Declan xxx
Horne Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 2:45 PM
I just love this deep, deep sonnet, Andrea. Hope you're well today, my friend
Johnson Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 2:27 PM
May our paths be filled with appreciative eyes. That make us grateful and truly wise. To spend some time with a friend or two. What more in life could you ask to do. Thank's for the help on the word coup. That is the correct spelling. I know, I looked up 20 other words first. :)
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January 12, 2012 at 9:17 AM
Love the beautify thought of content and form Andrea. Agape, Moses
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January 12, 2012 at 7:03 AM
you get to me every time with your awesome sonnets. harry
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January 12, 2012 at 6:42 AM
You maybe on the right path
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