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" EXISTENCE " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of ocean, cloud, twilight and nature

Before the Sun Goes Down

Before the sun goes down

Behind the mountains of the temporal,

And onto the valley of the eternal,

My soul feels like singing 

The sorrows and joys of life,

From the dawn of my birth
 
Till the upcoming sunset of my 

Existence!*







© Demetrios Trifiatis    
       10 July 2022
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* This poem would be in the introduction of my fourth book of 
poetry which, God willing, would be out before Christmas, I hope. 
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**My intention is to dedicate my new book, to all my friends at PoetrySoup 
who have honored me with their visits and comments!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 1:35 PM
An engaging poem, a tribute to a joyful life. Great opening poem my friend. Look forward to the book. Bill
Poet Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Dear friend, Demetrios! You have a spotless spirit, and your thoughts and emotions are always aligned with God's. The news of your impending book brought much delight to my heart. A GIANT round of applause to you, my friend, on the impending release of your work.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:48 AM
I do appreciate your gracious visit and excellent comment, my friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!
Cunningham Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 8:19 AM
From the start of your existence to the end, captured well in your verse. A beautiful introduction to your book Demetrios. The wanderer has returned.lol Tom
Cunningham Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 1:57 PM
Definitely on the cards Demetrios
Trifiatis Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 1:09 PM
Is it in the wonderer's plans to visit Kefalonia? Thank you so much for your precious comment, my dearest Tom. Blessings!
M  Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 7:22 AM
Lovely Demetrios! Debx
Trifiatis Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 1:07 PM
Deb, my dearest, how lovely to see you! Blessings!
Pandit Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 6:52 AM
BIG congrats on your upcoming publication my friend. Sorrows and joy--life of ebb and flow for everyone.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 1:10 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words and your congratulations, my dearest friend, Vijay! Blessings
George Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 2:35 AM
Keep singing , dear friend ! Your mind is clear and you abide with God in thoughts and feelings !
Trifiatis Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 2:43 AM
That is my intention, my dearest, Valsa for I do not wish to disappoint our Lord anymore! Thank you for your kind words! Blessings!
Mcintosh Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 2:30 AM
What is the title of your book? Will it be available on Amazon? God bless you kind friend. Love, Gina
Trifiatis Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 2:40 AM
The title of my fourth book would be: BEFORE THE SUN GOES DOWN. YES, it would be on Amazon as the other three are! Thank you so much. This would be my last one because it seems...I am running out of time, hahahaha! Blessings!
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