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Before Me, There a Beautiful Lady Stood

Before Me, There A Beautiful Lady Stood Bright as sky - promises of glowing rainbows She no longer scrawny knees and sharp elbows Before me, there a beautiful lady stood Asking if I wanted to dance- yes I would! Four years back, teenage lass had asked me my name Now that pretty, grown woman asked me my game Dancing that night I saw how well she had grown She became the first of true loves I have known. Such blessing was not meant for the likes of me I saw what was right, so I soon set her free Because of my wilder ways, fast roving eyes I left her, in purity in the skies! Bright as sky - promises of glowing rainbows. She no longer scrawny knees and sharp elbows. Robert J. Lindley, 1-03-2017 Sonnet, Lin 11/11 Syllables Per Line: 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 Total # Syllables: 154 Total # Words: 124

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Date: 1/4/2017 4:27:00 PM
Hello Robert!! Another masterful sonnet indeed!! Reading your wonderful work here actually made me harken back to former times when I was much younger and learning the ways of the world and human interaction. Superb Work!! 7/FAV absolutely!! Continued Best Wishes . . . Gary
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Date: 1/3/2017 9:42:00 PM
Very moving and descriptive, Robert--a 7! Janice
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Date: 1/3/2017 11:47:00 AM
This was beautiful Robert and had that old world feel to it.
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Date: 1/3/2017 9:54:00 AM
A terrific sonnet Robert...I love how you put it "Before me, there a beautiful lady stood"
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