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Before It's Too Late

Before it’s too late Distant bells clatter on cloud fed weathered skies where darkness creeps past low light vestibules, faded beams flicker Short skirts wave in a winter wind, breezy attributes revealing fishnet thighs calling to the next hidden passenger, batting lashes and blowing bubbles of stale gum placed under crushed velvet seats worn in places, stained deliberately for bragging rights and handkerchief blotting A ghostly mist lingers as lips are touched up, bright red, crimson, shades of desire, occupational decisions, advertisements leaking into sewers and hopscotch squares spread along the avenue Silhouettes in porch lanterns, whistling…so unladylike, ducking constables with nightsticks swinging like the clapper in those damn bells waking the unsuspecting and spooking the transients offering a few coins for a ten dollar dream Swine wallows in last week’s gossip, slimy little beings fat on sausage and biscuits, cursing the rats pushing their way in below curtains and kitchen windows framing inquisitive eyes, watching cash change hands and satisfied smirks on the faces of those wiping feet on mats, greeting the family in disguise, shirt un-tucked, long day rewards and dinner on the table Yesterday’s newspaper tumbles down the walk, clinging to sign posts, featuring headlines of death, a warning in bold print, still at large, a menace to society in a grey overcoat, double breasted and fancy shoeprints in the fresh mud No further traces except the body, contorted and frozen, smeared faces littering cobblestone gutters, frightening children and pets, as passersby look to second floor balconies, oblivious Midnight calls, staggering drunkards exit Chauncey’s, hard up and spent, slurred laughter, boisterous to hide worries and tomorrow’s jobs, time clock lies and penciled in wishes Iron fence posts rust at the gateway as they glance to the headstones of friends long past and recent memories, sensing the urge, seeing the painted nails and low cut blouses, thinking… before it’s too late While from a secluded archway…

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Date: 4/25/2017 9:35:00 PM
What an incredible slice of life you are unveiling here . . .'While from a secluded archway…' Is there more to come? That would be great! Have you ever written a book Chris or considered doing so? Amitiés
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Chris Green
Date: 4/26/2017 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much Anne Marie. I haven't decided yet if there will be more, but you never know. Yes I have written a book, a few of them. There's not much I haven't written I think. I try everything at least once. :)
Date: 4/25/2017 6:18:00 PM
So many images! A fantastic write! 7
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Chris Green
Date: 4/26/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim. I am happy you stopped by to read this one.
Date: 4/25/2017 3:06:00 PM
Chris wow i was on a journey with your words, so well done A7
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Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. Just strolling on the dark side a little today.
Date: 4/25/2017 3:03:00 PM
- Chris, here you have really opened a large window ... a window that we almost did not dare to look through - Unfortunately, the view and the sounds are our real world - WoooW !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/25/2017 3:20:00 PM
Just get some heavy drapes my friend, they block out a lot of stuff. :) Thanks so very much Anne Lise.
Date: 4/25/2017 2:43:00 PM
A slice of life we don't really care to look at...very well composed Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 2:49:00 PM
Thanks so much Tim.
Date: 4/25/2017 2:01:00 PM
You just gave me snapshots of a manic tragic dark crazy busy unshameful world here...Very dark...Chris...So different than your romantic style...but still I loved it.Being able to write differently shows what a talent you have.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 2:35:00 PM
Thanks so very much sweet Charmaine for your wonderful and humbling comments. I appreciate you so much.
Date: 4/25/2017 1:47:00 PM
Wow... I'd like to think I wrote this, only I didn't. That yesterday's newspaper stanza... Speaking about emotive writing as if you're standing smack in the middle of it.
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Date: 4/25/2017 1:51:00 PM
Welcome to the dark side of Chris. :) Thanks again Darren, just walking on a different poetic path today hoping it leads me to someplace beautiful. :)
Date: 4/25/2017 1:05:00 PM
a punch drunk poetic verse of delirious travel on a grand scale...well done poet.if for the dense and pithy contest good luck..should do very well if not still a great write..
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Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 1:12:00 PM
Funny you should ask that Fredric, this poem was inspired by that contest and the poem the sponsor had listed in the contest rules section. I do not plan on entering it, but I read the first stanza of that poem and was inspired to write this one. Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 4/25/2017 12:54:00 PM
Wow! This was jam-packed with imagery and vivid descriptions! Great write. 7
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Chris Green
Date: 4/25/2017 1:10:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend. Just taking a few steps outside the box.

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