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Before I'M Out of Time

Will destiny allow This poet’s wrinkled brow To write a poem now That brings a great big WOW? I scarcely think it will. For wrinkled brows can kill And leave a fruitless chill. Then where would be the thrill? I’d rather think that love That’s sanctioned from above Will bring the needed shove Toward what I’m dreaming of. Though I'm not in my prime A mountain I must climb And find that perfect rhyme Before I’m out of time Written By John Posey 01/09/13

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/22/2013 7:30:00 AM

love it the flow is lovely you are never too old fine write

John Posey
Date: 5/22/2013 9:48:00 AM

Linda, thank you so much for your visit. I value your comments.... Jake

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/17/2013 7:34:00 PM

Very clever mono rhyme !! Well done Jake!! Keep writing. I'm enjoying your works. Thank you for your kind encouragement and visit. Deb

John Posey
Date: 4/18/2013 8:57:00 AM

Thanks Deb. Your talent adds value to your approving comment... Love ya.... Jake

Dinda Minardi

Date: 3/17/2013 9:29:00 AM

loved every line, Jones. You have strong meaning in every of ur poems. Incredible.

John Posey
Date: 3/17/2013 11:20:00 AM

Thank you. Your comments strengthen my resolve to find that perfect rhyme..... Love ya....... Jake

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/5/2013 4:37:00 PM

It appears you had enough time. I enjoyed this poem Jake.

John Posey
Date: 3/6/2013 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Friend. Your comments are much appreciated. Your talent lends credibility to your praise..... Jake

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/24/2013 8:54:00 AM

I love your poem. I say that if there is a will - there will always be a way. Remember that God is on your side. Much enjoyed your poem today. Lucilla

Bethany St John

Date: 2/2/2013 6:39:00 PM

Love this Jake! wonderful flow and great metaphor! I always thoroughly enjoy reading your work.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/29/2013 5:26:00 PM

Methinks you could write anywhere and do a great job. Mountain climbing may give inspiration but you already have that! Love, Lizzy

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/23/2013 6:21:00 PM

L.O.V.E.D. I.T.... You're one of my favorite poets.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/14/2013 10:16:00 PM

You've already done that! This is a lovely poem! More power to you, and may God grant you all your needs according to His riches in glory! Hugs!

John Posey
Date: 1/15/2013 11:17:00 AM

You're like a fresh voice in a din of confusion. You have gained a friend indeed. I hope I can fell the same... Love Ya..... Jake

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/14/2013 4:20:00 PM

Great metaphor used in this one..This work has great poetic qualities..Sara

John Posey
Date: 1/14/2013 4:44:00 PM

Sara, I truly value your comments. Your posts qualify the value of your critiques. Thank you for your many visits. I will be visiting you more often...... Jake

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/14/2013 4:22:00 PM

Thanks so much for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 1/10/2013 11:56:00 AM

I love this poem and its optimism. Persons whose heart is young always find what they want.

John Posey
Date: 1/16/2013 2:06:00 PM

Thanks, Vesna, I appreciate your visit...jake

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2013 8:46:00 PM

John, you will find the perfect rhyme...i do not think one is ever to old to climb and find their dreams... love the poem..LINDA

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2013 3:46:00 PM

Beautiful optimism...and well written, too, John! With this attitude I'm sure the universe will oblige. Always, Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/9/2013 6:37:00 AM

You will get a large WOOOOW from me John. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Posey
Date: 1/9/2013 6:55:00 AM

Thank you, precious friend. I just finished this one... It wasn't as bad as I thought it might be... Just another form that sounded interesting..... Love Ya Much....Jake