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"Bee's Valentine Red Velvet Cake hand fed Life's luscious lips licked creamy icing thick sweet tongue tasted sticky moist fingers stroke a heart’s strings warm in a burning bed Snowflakes dissolve on your tongue Kissed naked in albis lux two becoming Love (LadyLabyrinth/2020) "Poetry, How Does It Feel" / Akua Naru https://youtu.be/anK-WR7MbaM 1. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_dilettante_diaries_love_in_motion_1063695 2. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/prophecy_1205529

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/16/2020 9:01:00 PM

I love your,"Red Velvet Cake with creamy icing thick." Can you please send me a slice???? It sounds great.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/17/2020 1:21:00 AM

A belated Happy Valentines, to the gorgeous Paula Goldsmith. OMG I absolutely have fallen in LOVE...with Red Velvet Cake, I'm afraid. It is the worst addiction of sensual pleasure I have in my hands at present. The best icing is the Cream Cheese icing, with Lemon Juice...sweet yet tart. Recipe below somewhere in one of the comments. I will share with you here again. Thank you for taking a bite of my Valentines Poem. Leanne x

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/17/2020 1:21:00 AM

https://sallysbakingaddiction.com/red-velvet-layer-cake-with-cream-cheese-frosting/

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 2/15/2020 4:25:00 AM

https://youtu.be/eryKY1fhUlo

Ts Poetry
Date: 2/15/2020 4:42:00 AM

Very beautiful Love

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/14/2020 6:48:00 PM

Sexy finesse Poetess..."Fingers stroke a heart's strings, warm in a burning bed..." that kind of love is very dangerous...my mind makes beautiful art with the imagery of a woman playing the instrument of a man's heart as if it were a flaming Koto in a room of rich red emotion...J.A.B.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/15/2020 4:44:00 AM

Life is a chess board, a deck of cards, a school room. I am of the opinion I am more wabi-sabi, than Iki and Champagne is the Devil's Urine.

Justin Bordner
Date: 2/15/2020 2:19:00 AM

No blame no game...J.A.B.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/14/2020 9:50:00 PM

For my sins, I blame the champagne. Three Hail Marys and all shall be absolved. I had a Geisha moment, and went all Iki. Thank you Marquis de Bordner.

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/14/2020 2:10:00 PM

Feels like heaven , and taste like more...a provocative piece

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/14/2020 3:36:00 PM

In my defence, I have to confess, Red Velvet cake and champagne, does strange things to me. It's delish'....and 'extra'. Trust you had a Valentines worth celebrating. L x

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/14/2020 3:36:00 PM

https://sallysbakingaddiction.com/red-velvet-layer-cake-with-cream-cheese-frosting/

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 2/14/2020 6:49:00 AM

Shadow Magnet.

Ts Poetry
Date: 2/14/2020 11:06:00 AM

https://youtu.be/izWWyfZopD0

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/14/2020 10:22:00 AM

https://youtu.be/4mVcb9WcloU

Ts Poetry
Date: 2/14/2020 7:59:00 AM

https://youtu.be/8cvakTZAzz8

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/14/2020 6:49:00 AM

https://youtu.be/8Og9kbfmN5Q

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 2/14/2020 5:38:00 AM

“When you walk to the edge of all the light you have and take that first step into the darkness of the unknown, you must believe that one of two things will happen. There will be something solid for you to stand upon or you will be taught to fly.”

Ts Poetry
Date: 2/14/2020 7:56:00 AM

Such wisdom. I really like this quote x

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 2/14/2020 5:35:00 AM

“Fortune sides with him who dares.”

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/14/2020 5:36:00 AM

“Pitiful is the person who is afraid of taking risks. Perhaps this person will never be disappointed or disillusioned; perhaps she won’t suffer the way people do when they have a dream to follow. But when that person looks back – and at some point everyone looks back – she will hear her heart saying, “What have you done with the miracles that God planted in your days? What have you done with the talents God bestowed on you? You buried yourself in a cave because you were fearful of losing those talents. So this is your heritage; the certainty that you wasted your life.” Paulo Coelho

Ts Poetry

Date: 2/14/2020 4:51:00 AM

It's more than candy hearts and flowers, it's moments in the sun and on the sand, undressed showing all the imperfections that make us perfect for one another. Knowing you would go to the moon or even the ends of the Earth to see the other smile. A valentine is more than showing off your love for a day but s romantic gesture that leads to a lifetime of happiness. Sweet honey kisses your Valentine poem is off the charts...happy days ahead Modesty xx XXXX

Ts Poetry
Date: 2/14/2020 9:05:00 AM

Nothing can replicate the euphoria of love.

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/14/2020 5:34:00 AM

“Do you want me to tell you something really subversive? Love is everything it's cracked up to be. That's why people are so cynical about it. It really is worth fighting for, being brave for, risking everything for. And the trouble is, if you don't risk anything, you risk even more.”

Ts Poetry
Date: 2/14/2020 4:52:00 AM

I remembered to favorite this one :)

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 2/14/2020 2:46:00 AM

;) . . .

Ts Poetry
Date: 2/14/2020 4:45:00 AM

Lol

Lady Labyrinth
Date: 2/14/2020 3:14:00 AM

p.s. there is no way I'm going for White Socks...just way too Vanilla.