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Hear the buzzing, see the dance of the bees Working all hours of day on the bower Gathering nectar from blossom on trees Flitting and circling flower to flower. A taste of honey, prepared in the hive So delicious and nutritiously sweet We don't realise how hard the bees strive In producing this pure liquid gold treat. Mother’s in the castle, queen of her hive No messing with her, she’ll sting to her death She takes mating flights to keep her hive live Laying eggs, hardly leaves time to draw breath. Maybe the bees all have stings in their tails But only attack when danger prevails. 24th November 2020

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Date: 11/24/2020 1:52:00 PM
Great sonnet, in form and content...amazing how bees can turn pollen into honey...enjoyed the read! :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/24/2020 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Sandra, it is amazing what bees do, glad you enjoyed the read... Belle:-)
Date: 11/24/2020 10:12:00 AM
Wonderful. I have a lot of respect for bees and all creatures. They work together to preserve a colony like ants, instead of trying to destroy everything. we have a lot to learn from them if only people would take heed. well done. Much enjoyed.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/24/2020 11:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Peter, all creatures great and small have a purpose and a contribution to make to the world's cycle of life and well being. I agree we have much to learn from them and must respect them too... Belle
Date: 11/24/2020 8:13:00 AM
Lovely info here...Well, put together...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/24/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Arturo... Belle

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