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Bees

A flower's scent is on the breeze Their seductive fragrance is soon appeased By kisses from honeybees They carry pollen to and fro Finding nectar as they go Making fruits and flowers grow Hear them buzz as they fly Their sweet honey in hives nearby As they navigate neath an azure sky A toxin in their sting Can prevent illness that a virus brings They generate heat with waves of their wings Queens wear the crown not kings They use their antenna to measure flight speed And detect smells of the flowers they need They are amazing insects indeed! ---- 9/20/16

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Date: 9/30/2016 11:03:00 PM
Hi Joseph, I agree bees are amazing but so is this write. Congratulations on your winning write.It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 9/30/2016 1:13:00 AM
Very beautiful write, Joseph:) I like the way you rhymed it:) congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 9/30/2016 12:41:00 AM
Amazing indeed! Congrats on your win. :)
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Date: 9/29/2016 8:41:00 PM
very nice and I see you won with it. BIG congrats to you, Joseph.
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Date: 9/29/2016 3:30:00 PM
Congrats well done well deserved x
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Date: 9/29/2016 2:48:00 PM
Beautiful poem,Joseph, congratulations on your win :-) Hugs
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Date: 9/29/2016 1:43:00 PM
Great poem Joseph congrats on 4th hugs
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Joseph May
Date: 9/29/2016 8:30:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Shadow...hugs
Date: 9/29/2016 1:21:00 PM
Joseph-lovely poem about bees :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:18:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your placement in the 'bee' contest! Sandra
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:06:00 PM
Dear Joseph, my hearty congrats on the big win !! lovely rhyme !// love, Anu:)
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Date: 9/29/2016 12:00:00 PM
Enjoyed your rhyme, Joseph! Congrats!
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Date: 9/23/2016 12:39:00 PM
This is both enjoyable and informative, Joseph. I like honey and mead! Regards // paul
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Date: 9/22/2016 5:22:00 PM
Again I love this great poem. I hope it does really well in the contest. A beautiful write my friend.
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Date: 9/22/2016 5:54:00 AM
Oh friend, I enjoy reading your poem. Thank you for sharing...........A.M.
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Date: 9/21/2016 9:50:00 AM
Well done, Joseph. Informative and entertaining as well. Good luck!
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:10:00 AM
Very informative Jospeh and you wove the required words in beautifully good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Joseph May
Date: 9/21/2016 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Jan
Date: 9/20/2016 11:30:00 PM
Nicely written and informative, too! Enjoyed your poem, Joseph:)
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Joseph May
Date: 9/21/2016 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Laura

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