Beelzebub Incognito

Sweetly cavalier rosy cheeks and eyes clear
Intent gaze saying see and trust dear
Chivvy up your pure skirts for a quick poke
Promises betrothal but he's a joke

The diabolic cloot, fiend to the end
Laughs in your shame to abaddon would send
The sparkling eyes and sweet deceiving smile
Gave a demidevil surprise child vile

Child of lust, incubus frets your dreaming
Calculated evil, cruel living
Walk like an angel, daimon incognito
You're a booty call, his hot tomato

Deceived, deceived, a sad sinner conceived
Denied, beset yet salvation granted
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rucker Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 2:07 AM
Doris; I don't "do" negative. I love it! Thank you for commenting on my poem.
Rucker Avatar
November 13, 2010 at 1:13 PM
Doris; Demonic!
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 7:38 PM
Quite interesting, Doris. And cool title you gave this one. Congrats on your win in this unique contest. Luv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 2:51 PM
Terrific Sonnet Doris, it sure deserves to be on the podium, go girl - more of this >> James :)
Freeman Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Beautiful job on this one Doris, Congratulations on a poem's honor, Very Good. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 5:05 AM
More congrats Doris for your HM in the devil made me do it contest with this wonderful entry luv.. great message here so now enjoy your special honor all your own today with luv..
Johnson Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Well done> Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Guzzi Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 6:23 AM
Interesting! very interesting topic for the form & great whack um in the head ending! Huzzah! Light & Love
Ryoo Avatar
October 31, 2010 at 11:24 PM
Wow! I give you 7 pts for this one. Keep writing! Thank you for commenting on my poem. HJ
Harper Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Bad man cavalier,now I know what he looks like, fun reading, thanks :) Sheri
Wellington Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 6:57 AM
Your last line!! O what sweet salvation! Undeserved, but lovingly granted. Doris, today you have reminded me of a reason to continually praise God. Thanks for taking the time to read me as well as comment. Be blessed today, in the name of the Lord. Joy (Jew)
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 5:24 AM
deceived,deceived,a sad sinner conceived denied,beset yet salvation granted.....what a power-package,only the man who has overpowered the devil can honestly comment about this work.u are too much Doris.
Kendrick Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 3:30 PM
Very daring write about the De__Vile..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Keep on writing..The copy of my poem in print came today..Mom
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