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Bee Warned

One day when I ran out of money, I knew where to get me free honey, But forgetting one thing That the owners do sting, And black eyes from bee stings ain’t funny.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/28/2015 6:39:00 PM

Sounds like the voice of experience. The honey could be worth it.

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/3/2015 7:27:00 PM

G'day Duke... oh yes, but quite a while ago. I don't think any honey is worth being stung by bees. Thanks for your comment Duke - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2015 7:48:00 PM

YIKES. they give black eyes too?? Thanks for the fun poems today.

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/3/2015 7:24:00 PM

Hello Andrea... yes, in the past, bees have given me a number of black eyes from being too inquisitive. Thank you once again Andrea - Lindsay

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/26/2015 8:03:00 PM

lol! Good if it's just black eyes...hahaha... love this one. Lindsay! Kim

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/3/2015 7:21:00 PM

G'day Kim... you can laugh Kim. Due to too many bee stings I must be very aware of them now because of an allergy. It serves me right though... leave bees alone! Once again, thanks for your support Kim - Lindsay

John Williams

Date: 7/26/2015 3:24:00 AM

Very good Lindsay--gave me a laugh--i remembered when I got stung approaching a bee hive---they sure give you something to remember.....kind regards----John

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/3/2015 7:18:00 PM

Thank you John... for some reason or other, almost all of my encounters with bees have me being stung close to the eyes; hence black eyes - catch you John - Lindsay

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/25/2015 9:22:00 PM

Ouch! Yeah, got to watch out for those bees! I enjoyed your limerick, Lindsay! Love, KIm

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/3/2015 7:14:00 PM

G'day Kim... there is certainly a price to pay when an amateur honey collector gets involved. Thank you for commenting Kim - Lindsay