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Bedtime Circus

Each bedtime makes me a night-clown, Minty paste seltzers every tooth. Puppetry for sleep at sundown, Ends in a circus, dreams of youth. Tamed at knee in dress of cotton, Each bedtime makes me a night-clown. Farce forgives day-gains ill-gotten, Hangs on bedpost the big-top crown. Smile bones polished, no longer brown, Gaslights flicker, still, no romance. Each bedtime makes me a night-clown, Illusionist trick, sleepy trance. Ticket prices have now been paid, The audience has been sat down. Soft as applause, my head is laid. Each bedtime makes me a night-clown.

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Date: 12/4/2023 6:22:00 PM
Dear Jaymee, your vivid creative imagery possesses such an enchanting quality. I especially adore "Minty paste seltzers every tooth" and "Smile bones polished" - wow! I enjoyed the wonderful whimsy of your poetic expression. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/4/2023 8:12:00 AM
Loved how unique this was - an exciting read that got my brain whirring and kept me interested.
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Date: 12/3/2023 8:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win Jaymee, Very nicely penned
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 12/4/2023 12:25:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Joseph. I'm never sure when I undertake an unusual topic / angle whether it will be well regarded. I was delighted to see it had placed - the form you chose for the contest was super interesting to work with, trying to fit all the syllables in just right. It was a lot of fun - thanks again!
Date: 11/28/2023 4:47:00 PM
Such a creative write, and you write in a wonderful way.
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 12/4/2023 12:28:00 PM
That is such a lovely thing to say, David. Thank you. I really had to wrestle with this one to make it all come together. I sincerely appreciate the call out.
Date: 11/27/2023 4:45:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this bedtime poem, Jaymee. Fun stuff.
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 12/4/2023 12:29:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel - and thanks for making another stop on my side of PS. I really need to get around more :)

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