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Bed of Roses

The love
you've sown within
the heart and soul of me
grows like a lush summer garden
and I am filled with your tender beauty
I gather roses in the sun
and offer you bouquets
on petals sweet
we lie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/19/2009 1:29:00 PM
Beautiful poem Robin, i just love poems with roses in them>>James
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Date: 4/4/2009 12:51:00 PM
An evidence for the deep effect of words ! No need for much tongue twists, just a couple of heart-to-heart words would always do it ! You, my friend, are TALENTED ! best wishes Tariq Zaqout
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Date: 4/1/2009 10:49:00 PM
Awesomely beautiful, dear robin. Lainie
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Date: 4/1/2009 9:38:00 AM
Hello my friend Robin, very nice Rictameter. I haven't tried this one yet, but after reading this, I'll try. This gives me an inspiration. Thank you. Ernilando
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Date: 3/29/2009 7:18:00 PM
Dear Robin, I'm not familiar with this form so I had to look it up Excellent in form and message YOUR Talent Excells Someone is very lucky to have YOUR Heart Thank-YOU for YOUR very Gracious comments;inspiring the Heart Soul and Pen Very Endearing ALWAYS... HG
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Date: 3/28/2009 4:37:00 AM
Beautiful images and a sweet and tender sentiment... BRAVO Robin! Blessings and hugs, Keith
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:38:00 AM
Simplicity at it's best and most beautiful! Love the last few lines! You are a gifted poet Robin! Truely, Trudy
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Date: 3/20/2009 5:02:00 AM
Thanks for your comment, I look forward for your visit from time to time. I am filled with your tender beauty I gather roses in the sun and offer you bouquets on petals sweet we lie Thinking of all the possibilities of the wonder of friendship and poetry.
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Date: 3/16/2009 6:51:00 PM
THTA WAS SO NICE OF A POEM ROBIN.........................DANIELLE
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Date: 3/14/2009 10:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem Robin, nice form and thoughts...Raul
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Date: 3/14/2009 9:39:00 AM
What an uplifting poem. Nice use of this challenging form. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 3/14/2009 1:37:00 AM
A love poem for my favourites Robin.A love filled read .Rgds Brian & thank for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:13:00 PM
This is beautiful Robin, I love it...gonna add it to my fav's.... Thanks so much for all your comments.
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Date: 3/13/2009 12:46:00 AM
Simple but a very effective love poem Robin.Especially like the inner poem of L1,2,3. Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/12/2009 6:49:00 PM
....so tenderly soft and amazing this write! The title itself, is such a wonderful image...."You Always Astound Me Robin," with the love that lives inside of "You!!!"~The man whom wins "Your Heart" dear, is going to be one of the luckiest souls, that has 'ever' lived!!!~Smile~ And, I believe this so very completely!!! "Beautiful Beautiful Write Dear~My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!:):)
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Date: 3/12/2009 6:40:00 PM
Smile~This is soo very beautiful dear~I could read it over and over and over!!!:) "Hello Gifted, Precious & Beautiful Robin!!!"~I hope that "You" are doing wonderfully today dear!!? Right now I am just reflecting upon this beautiful write...." You" never fail, to reflect the tenderness that is deeply engraved inside of "Your Priceless Soul!!!"....cont....
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Date: 3/12/2009 4:24:00 PM
What a tender poem, filled with purity in love, wonderful, love, Kristin
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Date: 3/12/2009 12:42:00 PM
I like the last line...We lie...double entrendre. Light & Love
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Date: 3/12/2009 12:33:00 PM
Beautiful form, beautiful content. Sigh. Gorgeous love poem. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/12/2009 11:14:00 AM
What beautiful images this brings! So tender and full of love, and the format is great. I agree with Chris, there is such a gentle purity here. Love this. Love and hugs, Amy :)
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Date: 3/12/2009 9:45:00 AM
What a beautiful love poem, Robin! Life is not always a "Bed of Roses," but I see hope in these words and I am happy for you!!! Love, Carolyn (By the way, "Bed of Roses" is the name of one of my favorite movies. It makes me cry each time I see it. If you haven't seen it yet, I know you will not be disappointed if you check it out.)
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Date: 3/12/2009 8:04:00 AM
Oh...I love the way you ended this beauty!! :) Lovely....love Carrie
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Date: 3/12/2009 7:38:00 AM
My dear friend...this is so gorgeous..love the beauty of this piece..so pure and fresh....the last two lines are winners.. good work Robin.
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Date: 3/12/2009 7:23:00 AM
wow very good
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Date: 3/12/2009 7:02:00 AM
On petals sweet we lie, so pretty Stacey and I havent seen this form before, it really gets your attention.
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