Bed of Roses

Beautiful poem Robin, i just love poems with roses in them>>James

An evidence for the deep effect of words ! No need for much tongue twists, just a couple of heart-to-heart words would always do it ! You, my friend, are TALENTED ! best wishes Tariq Zaqout

Awesomely beautiful, dear robin. Lainie

Hello my friend Robin, very nice Rictameter. I haven't tried this one yet, but after reading this, I'll try. This gives me an inspiration. Thank you. Ernilando

Dear Robin, I'm not familiar with this form so I had to look it up Excellent in form and message YOUR Talent Excells Someone is very lucky to have YOUR Heart Thank-YOU for YOUR very Gracious comments;inspiring the Heart Soul and Pen Very Endearing ALWAYS... HG

Beautiful images and a sweet and tender sentiment... BRAVO Robin! Blessings and hugs, Keith

Simplicity at it's best and most beautiful! Love the last few lines! You are a gifted poet Robin! Truely, Trudy

Thanks for your comment, I look forward for your visit from time to time. I am filled with your tender beauty I gather roses in the sun and offer you bouquets on petals sweet we lie Thinking of all the possibilities of the wonder of friendship and poetry.

THTA WAS SO NICE OF A POEM ROBIN.........................DANIELLE

Beautiful poem Robin, nice form and thoughts...Raul

What an uplifting poem. Nice use of this challenging form. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

A love poem for my favourites Robin.A love filled read .Rgds Brian & thank for your welcome comments

This is beautiful Robin, I love it...gonna add it to my fav's.... Thanks so much for all your comments.

Simple but a very effective love poem Robin.Especially like the inner poem of L1,2,3. Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

....so tenderly soft and amazing this write! The title itself, is such a wonderful image...."You Always Astound Me Robin," with the love that lives inside of "You!!!"~The man whom wins "Your Heart" dear, is going to be one of the luckiest souls, that has 'ever' lived!!!~Smile~ And, I believe this so very completely!!! "Beautiful Beautiful Write Dear~My Love Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!:):)

Smile~This is soo very beautiful dear~I could read it over and over and over!!!:) "Hello Gifted, Precious & Beautiful Robin!!!"~I hope that "You" are doing wonderfully today dear!!? Right now I am just reflecting upon this beautiful write...." You" never fail, to reflect the tenderness that is deeply engraved inside of "Your Priceless Soul!!!"....cont....

What a tender poem, filled with purity in love, wonderful, love, Kristin

I like the last line...We lie...double entrendre. Light & Love

Beautiful form, beautiful content. Sigh. Gorgeous love poem. Love, Shar

What beautiful images this brings! So tender and full of love, and the format is great. I agree with Chris, there is such a gentle purity here. Love this. Love and hugs, Amy :)

What a beautiful love poem, Robin! Life is not always a "Bed of Roses," but I see hope in these words and I am happy for you!!! Love, Carolyn (By the way, "Bed of Roses" is the name of one of my favorite movies. It makes me cry each time I see it. If you haven't seen it yet, I know you will not be disappointed if you check it out.)

Oh...I love the way you ended this beauty!! :) Lovely....love Carrie

My dear friend...this is so gorgeous..love the beauty of this piece..so pure and fresh....the last two lines are winners.. good work Robin.

wow very good

On petals sweet we lie, so pretty Stacey and I havent seen this form before, it really gets your attention.