Poet Destroyer A Poet Dodoitsu

Bed Bug Bites

BED BUGS BITES

It's time to fix the mattress
fluffy pillows and blankets,
enough room for just one more.
BITE ME' if you can!

Swat after, swat, after swat!  
Red itchy skin, what the h3ll!
The open breeze feels real good,
crawling too bite NATE!

BY; PD
________________________________________


NOTE~ I've never been bitten by these insects,
I just love the way my mother would always say...
"Don't let the bed bugs bite!"

Contest: "Bite me!"  

**I bite Nathan, who'll probably will love it ;-)**...LOL...

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

1 2 3

Poet Destroyer A June 6, 2015 at 11:56 PM stupid poem. LOL

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 2, 2013 at 10:15 AM hi there pd!! how are you? the Christmas card that I sent you was recently returned to me :( ...

Mehnaz Veetil February 7, 2013 at 12:50 PM Hi Linda....how have you been? a cute one here,Linda, ....'bite-me-bugs'.....loved reading....

Harry Horsman November 27, 2012 at 10:50 AM wonderful poem PD, love your imagery and your mother, for giving you the incentive to write this..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 22, 2012 at 10:53 AM Very nice twist at the end-- yeah, I don't think I have been bitten by bed bugs before, don't want to be bitten by those either--... thanks for the thanksgiving greetings, I don't get to be active here as much, but it's nice to get comments-- happy thanksgiving as well to you, pd! Enjoy your day with family and friends!

Phyllis Babcock October 19, 2012 at 9:52 AM Cute poem on nasty little bugs. Hope I never get to see one. love phyl

Jon A Cavanaugh September 4, 2012 at 9:30 PM How I enjoy poems about bugs and insects. And the spelling "h3ll" I love it. I was going to use a @symbol when using such words but I love your spelling much better. Would you mind if i adopted this usage in my poems?

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2012 at 10:23 AM Hey, PD. how are you doing, sweetie? I remember this poem very well. I LOVE it.

Debbie Guzzi August 2, 2012 at 6:34 PM Ahhh romance among the bed bugs!! Light & Love

David Scott July 27, 2012 at 3:43 PM just wanted to say hi did you read my parasights poem x david scott

Kash Poet July 26, 2012 at 10:39 PM hi PD ,enjoyed this funny poem very much!Thanks for visiting my poem page......Good night......kash

David Scott July 25, 2012 at 10:46 AM hi linder cool poem an age old saying i was often told before bed time I wrote one called parasights back in 2011 which I think you will like thankyou so much for coments on sublime I did not know if this was the first one i put on here or visualiseation it was originaly a valentimes poem i dont know if you know i soup mailed you on 20 7 12 x david scott

Pace Ink-U-Script July 1, 2012 at 9:42 AM This was fun..my step dad would recite that before we closed our eyes at night!!! Lol

Tracy Marie Windisch Mason June 14, 2012 at 10:48 PM Dear Destroyer, Lovely and light,this poem is adorable!Best wishes,Tracy.

Gwendolen Song June 14, 2012 at 9:50 PM There is a widespread problem of these lil buggars in my hometown right now...good thing I took precautions...I sleep on plastic! hahah...Hey, stop over and see my Toddler Poem..it's right up your alley...hahah...You need to write some more young lady! Your fans are getting restless.....ahhhh yaaa yaaa yaaa. Gwendolen

Karen Deeks June 5, 2012 at 3:37 AM Ha ha ha ... this is such fun and reminds me of when mum took my sister and i on a whim to brighton and we stayed in a hotel and yup ( there was a couple of the little devils in the room) sat up all night and relocated in the morn... she was not happy... tyvm will read some more late but love this one...

Shaz Cheesman June 3, 2012 at 6:32 AM hehehe.......i too remember the saying "Don't let the bed bugs bite" this takes me back. Well done!

Joy Wellington May 20, 2012 at 11:00 AM Girl you are a riot! Congrats on your win! Whatever you write is always an enjoyable [email protected] don't bite the poor guy too hard....lol. Joy Wells.

Daver Austin May 20, 2012 at 8:54 AM If you are really weird, you would bite back. AS usual, your poems are unusual, and unusually wonderful. Love, daver

Laura Breidenthal May 9, 2012 at 6:07 PM HAHA! Very nice. (: Always, Laura

Daver Austin May 3, 2012 at 2:32 PM Better a bed bug than a BIG HAIRY spider! Luck in this silly contest. Love, daver

Gwendolen Song April 29, 2012 at 4:21 PM Ribbit ribbit back atcha girl! I think I saw your entry! I really appreciate it and your supporting my contests too...you are really a diamond, PD! And you sparkle so bright! Love, Gwendolen (Barry White's voice really would rock in the body of a frog....right!?) ha ha.

Prince Ekpemandu April 27, 2012 at 2:34 PM good liar you are..just joking...its well written..your creativity is as beautiful as you are..keep the good work up and by the way still waiting for you soupmail...hope your contest aint over yet....

John Loving Iii April 26, 2012 at 3:27 PM good thing you wrote that note. EEEW!!!

Dinda Minardi April 25, 2012 at 9:03 AM A very witty write, P.D. :D

1 2 3