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Becoming Known

Find a place here in the half light of a morning where, still damp with dew and enameled in ice, there is calm curled under trees and dreams linger in the mist. There will be a sense that the morning has made room for you. Stop here. Feel the world pause in this place of in-between, before the real intrudes and sends the day off shackled to its clock. Here, there is nothing to be done but to listen, let play a dance of images to move across your mind, to feel that gorgeous ache for something that is waiting here for you, just out of reach, yet within a breath of becoming known. Sadly, all too soon, crows will appear dragging their black ribbons of unholy noise, bringing with them, the anesthesia of time.

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Date: 11/11/2023 2:15:00 PM
you are truly a brilliant and gifted poet, Paul. Your poem was soft yet powerful with its message at the end. I loved 'anesthesia of time.' Perfect! Your title alludes to something bigger, becoming known in a different sense, and I loved it. Have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/12/2023 12:44:00 AM
Overwhelmed by your comments , Sara...thankyou. Pleased that the poem found an appreciative soul and had meaning. Venturing into this space is quite humbling, returning always comes with a little sadness. Very much value your thoughtful feedback. Regards, Paul
Date: 11/10/2023 3:14:00 PM
Another of your excellent writes Paul. unfortunately we only get so many moments like this in life. Most, unappreciated as we rush to chase a dollar. A pleasure to read your thoughts always. Be well:)
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/12/2023 12:35:00 AM
So kind Daniel....thankyou. Finding that space is always a challenge...the world chatters away with distractions taking the mind up dead end streets. Take care...regards, Paul
Date: 11/10/2023 8:32:00 AM
I do wonder how many have that 'something to be known' on the edge of consciousness feeling? I can't comprehend it not being there but it's a tricky one to start a debate about - I'm having a first bingo outing with my friends soon (currently still plan to alternate with club nights out because we are indeed still cool) maybe I'll ask then. Love the poem, obviously :)
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/12/2023 12:29:00 AM
I seem to visit that place often...easy to spill over into a territory where language breaks down. Manage to come back with few feathers. Hope you had a win at Bingo...surprised that they still play. Thanks DD for your kind words.
Date: 11/10/2023 5:59:00 AM
Enjoyed your work thank you for posting
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/12/2023 12:24:00 AM
Thankyou Joyce, very much appreciate your feedback. Paul
Date: 11/10/2023 4:40:00 AM
'shackled to its clock". Love that line. When asked "what time is it" I would sometimes answer: "that will depend on which version of the space and time continuum you subscribe to"....A beautiful "ode to the pre-dawn peace"
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Paul Willason
Date: 11/12/2023 12:22:00 AM
Thanks John for commenting...I shall refrain from asking you the time...though I am mighty pleased you spent some of it reading the poem. Indebted, regards Paul

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