Becoming Invisible
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Midnight groans so quietly
From a tower far below,
Stars within the pathway
Give off a charcoal tinge,
And darkness roves, alone
Farther than my throbbing glance
And moves back into a shade
Like the deepening of these eyes
Where the pale glimmer withers
Past ghastly streaks of mourning
Like ashes, through the night
Setting the sun, to be gone
Constellations peacefully gather,
like an acrobat, falling to sadness
The moon peruses, a small light,
overseeing time's twisting fate
Night slowly fades into another gem
Alone, pierced by stars.
11/10/2017
Contest of Craig Hawkins:
Depression and Sadness
Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2016
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