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God search Begin Go in Within We are Alone Sans thought We’re free Silence Deepens We then So feel Currents Purring Bliss throbs Rising Filling Our form From head To toe Each pore A door Wherefrom Grace pours Pure heart Glistens Nectar Dripping Ignites All nodes God’s light Soft white Bursts forth Here now We feel Complete No doubts Remain Life play Goes on The dream Unfolds His will Is done We are Awake 31-March-2022 Written for: 'A BRIAN STRAND PREMIER CHOICE' contest

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Date: 4/1/2022 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on win, I enjoyed reading your poem. Outstanding write. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 4/1/2022 9:20:00 PM
Thank you, Debra, it all came in one breath!
Date: 4/1/2022 9:32:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your win! A profound experience of oneness with God so wonderfully expressed in simplicity. For me, in meditation, God's light is warm ambers, yellows and reds. I love the way you express this prayer and then bring us back to reality - "we are awake!" Blessings to you!
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Date: 4/1/2022 9:19:00 PM
You are indeed blessed, Sam. Colours can be any. Red, amber, yellow scripturally corresponds to the root, sacral and navel chakras. It doesn’t matter what the colour is. Allow and Enjoy!
Date: 4/1/2022 4:54:00 AM
Glory shared - the indwelling spirit speaks. A super footle which gets to the bottom of grace. Congratulations on your insightful words.
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Date: 4/1/2022 7:16:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 4/1/2022 2:31:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 4/1/2022 4:50:00 AM
Thank you, Beata!
Date: 3/31/2022 10:29:00 PM
Great footle on a spiritual theme. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/1/2022 1:06:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
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