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Beckoning Her

~ She reached for the ribbons of her gown not knowing why, but she held them in her hand as she floated through the ever changing mist, whites and grays in a swirling pattern, mesmerizing in blends and shifts, blurred yet possessing a clarity she could not explain or cared to think about right now She looked down on herself in her bed sobbing, clutching tightly a dampened pillow, lonely, a photo in a silver frame on the bedside table, missing... now very confused as a peaceful awareness wrapped about her warmly, caressing her spirit, washing away the pain, the sadness, the torment which she fought now to remember as it drifted below, creating new shadows about her feet but distant, never forgotten, she couldn’t, it was promised… Once more the satin ribbons were pulled gently, guided as if a feather laced kite on a silver string embracing blue skies, dancing about in the slow rhythm, spun in clouded dreams, breathless she soars higher, it seems towards the sun or perhaps a light of a different source, it felt soft, cool beckoning her and she yearned for it… for some reason it felt right Stars swept past her in wiry glistening designs like a sparkler at a summer cookout waved through the air in abstract cherry-lime glowings and apple pie tickles and she smiled, for the first time in a long time as the moon disappeared on the horizon, embracing this new experience she continued allowing the tender tugs on her ribbons to move her freely, when she felt something, it was a hand on hers, helping her hold the ribbons, it felt familiar, safe, comforting When she saw his eyes, as clear as she had ever seen anything, deep and friendly, soothing just as she had remembered…remembered? He took her by the hands and he came even more into focus “Hi there, I have missed you,” he sighed and she knew it was him He was here, wherever here was, he held her in his arms now as he said, “I promised you I would love you eternally, I have been waiting for you” She cried again, happy tears as she whispered. “You did, you did, is this…” “Shhh,” he placed a caring finger to her lips… ~

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Date: 12/23/2019 9:27:00 AM
What an amazing story, the reason why everyone loves your writes Chris, is you pay attention to the little details in your descriptions, they paint a visual that we can see in our mind's eye. Looking forward to the sequel!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 9:39:00 AM
Thanks my friend. This one really grabbed a hold of me as I wrote it, I could see everything as it was happening. I an happy you enjoyed this.
Date: 12/22/2019 10:51:00 AM
"He was here, wherever here was" - gorgeously done, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 8:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much Caren.
Date: 12/21/2019 11:04:00 AM
Chris this is an enchanting write - billowing ribbons tugged gently by a familiar,comforting memory - kudos Chris, your poetry is beyond magnificent. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 8:14:00 AM
Thank you again Jennifer, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment when I know you are not feeling well. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 12/21/2019 3:38:00 AM
Poet, story teller, artist...What other talents might you have? It was an intriguing write from the start, one that had to be read to fruition...and well worth the fitting end. Very nicely composed, Chris.
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Date: 12/23/2019 8:12:00 AM
Thanks so very much Lin. Coming from someone as talented as you, I am humbled by your kind words.I always look forward to your visits.
Date: 12/20/2019 7:13:00 PM
oh wow...his photo vanished because she had died and was reunited with the love of her life...i always said a love like that knows no boundaries that it will continue to flourish into the beyond... the love they portrayed in the movie "ghost" comes to mind...you sure can tell a wonderful story and enthrall your reader...i only wish it didn't end...it was that good...i am in awe of your talent... goodnight Chris... thanks for blessing us with an amazing poem! hugs :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 8:11:00 AM
Thank you my friend for all of the kindness you show me. You are correct about this, I am glad you found my message in this. I too believe that true love is unending, no matter what. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 12/20/2019 6:41:00 PM
Again your writing is amazing. Thanks for sharing this
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 8:10:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/20/2019 5:42:00 PM
Wow, you got me with the silver frame, due to an important photo in a silver frame near my bed...and the rest of the poem was amazing from there. Very well written Chris. :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/23/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, I am happy this one touched you my friend.

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